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But...does Cornetto know the true meaning of Rudra? Of Shiavaes (sp)? Of the occultists? Does anyone know what the affects of the Horse Shoe falls flowing backward will do to the surrounding areas?
maybe Jack didn't actually die when the giant snake swallowed him...maybe he was spit out moments later? Maybe he's going to resurface in the finale, with his skin all stomach-acid eaten?
GM...I still think you did a wonderful job of bringing us back into the story and developing it. I agree with both Sandra and Reaper with regard to Innocence...especially when it came to Cordelia. She was very protective throughout of Cordelia and I think she wouldn't have given up without a fight...but it's a little hard to overcome strong wind and character's with the kind of power that was displayed in GM's scene.
Something that didn't mesh for me was how Cordelia had not wanted to have Piscivours get in the vehicle with them...she was strongly against that...and yet now she herself is a part of the snake culture/Rudra...but I did like the aspect of her taking her rightful seat...the story plot is definitely thickening and coming to a head
It is true that it is hard to grasp all the aspects of this exercise and bring all of it into play.
As Sandra mentioned...dreams are not linear and she has provided a lot of food for thought that can be written about. I'm holding my breath as I wish that Sam could make it to the end - because my brain has been working overtime on the ending and I have an exciting end that would shock and delight many (am I allowed to say that?? lol ) and a strong dream scene is enormously needed from our girl Sandra.
However...as Cornetto has mentioned numerous times...only he knows the true aspect of SHIVA.
I am excited to see where this goes in the next posts....ultimately taking us to the home stretch.
I really would like to see more of these characters. If not here, then in another script that might be before the virus hits.
They've got lives and dreams in their hearts. How can a virus stop that really? I don't think it can. Unless the characters die in complete hopelessness. I'm thinking about Jack Stone: The Positive Thinking character enjoying himself, and James, not going out without a fight.
Neither of these characters just died without it being on their terms. They took things into their own hands somehow. That says a lot about them.
This isn't a passive story at all. It's about "the fight". It's about challenge and hope in the face of destruction. It's one heck of a story. It will be a shame to see it end-- but then again with each end comes a new beginning.
But...does Cornetto know the true meaning of Rudra? Of Shiavaes (sp)? Of the occultists? Does anyone know what the affects of the Horse Shoe falls flowing backward will do to the surrounding areas?
maybe Jack didn't actually die when the giant snake swallowed him...maybe he was spit out moments later? Maybe he's going to resurface in the finale, with his skin all stomach-acid eaten?
Mwooohaha!!!!!!
Maybe that was a strange initiation. Being spit back out. Sounds like Jonah and The Whale.
My ending has the twist of twists Oh well...we have to see where this goes
What I hate is that it gets down to two pwoplw and one has to kill the other...then there is only one...well except for Dreamscales' Jack Stone who is slithering by with his skin all acid eaten...lovely lalalalalala
I love words and the fact that when the page is blank...there's nothing there until words are formulated in my brain. Those thoughts...rushing through my viens and out my finger tips, find "life" on the page.
When people and places come to life...that to me is exciting.
MBCgirl =) My finger nails should look nice while I type - Red works!
Enjoy, Sandra! It's alot different than what you read. It's better than what you read...but...it's still exactly what it is, and that's not much, although it's light years beter than most theatrically released horror.
Enjoy, Sandra! It's alot different than what you read. It's better than what you read...but...it's still exactly what it is, and that's not much, although it's light years beter than most theatrically released horror.
You're doing what I've done so many times!!!! You're in The Strangers thread by accident!!! NO I'M IN THE STRANGER'S THREAD!!!!
I've done that so many times!!!! All the tabs and files I've got going it's ridiculous-- combine that with the physical world and wow!!!
I love words and the fact that when the page is blank...there's nothing there until words are formulated in my brain. Those thoughts...rushing through my viens and out my finger tips, find "life" on the page.
When people and places come to life...that to me is exciting.
MBCgirl =) My finger nails should look nice while I type - Red works!
Ok, Silly Willies comment on Shiva in the Shiva thread and comment on The Strangers in The Strangers thread. And no more comments about comments on the wrong thread. Ok?
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