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Posted: January 15th, 2009, 1:17pm Report to Moderator
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Just put my part up.
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George Willson
Posted: January 15th, 2009, 1:36pm Report to Moderator
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Gotta hand it to you. Not what I expected at all. Different, for sure.


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Posted: January 15th, 2009, 3:21pm Report to Moderator
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Interesting turn Yohn, out of curiousity who was killed?

I have to run off to work so I can't update the tracksheet for a few more hours. Orange is up next I think and she has Wolf and Timber to introduce.   They are Georges new character.  

I think I forgot to send her the character information, so I'll put it in the next post.
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No kill? That's odd. But the scene was good,
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Was there supposed to eb a kill?  If so, I'd say it needs to be added in.

We finally get teh Wolf and Timber intro.  Very funny...and interesting.  I route for Timber to be the lone survivor!!!!!
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So is that my Challenge Cornetto? To introduce Wolf and Timber?
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I don't think I got a challenge for you from George -  You can get one from him if you want otherwise you can just introduce Wolf and timber.   Wolf and Timber are considered one character - when one goes so does the other.

Though the last turn was good, there will need to be a double kill at some point.  I'll be sure to provide it in someone's special instructions.
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Okay, this is going to be my longest entry, but I swear it's not too long and all of it is important.  I wanted to have a really cool, action oriented death that had some tears in it and love and all that good stuff...so..yeah. I'm sending it to George now.
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Posted: January 15th, 2009, 7:25pm Report to Moderator
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wow! that was pdq. I'm looking forward to seeing it. Long and all!
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Yeah I had most of the scene already written out from when you gave me the heads up. The introduction of Wolf and Timber added some interesting things i had to explore thats why it's so long.
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Posted: January 15th, 2009, 7:53pm Report to Moderator
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Yohn that was fabulous!!!

The inner struggle being played out in John also demonstrates what's happening in the big scheme of things.

I was glad to see/hear Cordelia's scream reappearing again at this critical moment.

You've made a tough scene to write seem easy, the mark of talent.

And Piscovirus, staring up at the sky, laughing and talking about love. This is really a scene for an actor to grab hold of.

Way to go!!!

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Posted: January 15th, 2009, 7:57pm Report to Moderator
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Is there some special meaning to the name, Piscovirus?  I can't help but laugh every time I read that name/word.  Funny stuff...  
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Posted: January 15th, 2009, 7:58pm Report to Moderator
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Agkistrodon Piscivorus is the water moccasin snake or cottonmouth found in the eastern US.
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Ah...very good...very good.  The old cottonmouth...funny, I could name myslef that then I guess, I get cotten mouth quite often...
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I guess I missed the instruction for a challenge associated with the new character. And I thought at least some of you would get a kick out of there being a non-rabid animal in the mix.


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