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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: February 13th, 2009, 9:11pm Report to Moderator
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What if the Hokey Pokey, IS what it's all about?

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I'm surprised and a bit saddened by the lack of responses from all who contributed here.

Is that it????


It does seem thin to me also. I think we're missing about 5 people.

Sandra




A known mistake is better than an unknown truth.
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lol -- that would've been awesome. Far too 'sugary' for my tastes though, and more comedic. I enjoyed the final, posted ending a lot more. It wasn't a 'bad' ending, but it had its dark undertones. A hint that everything was going to be all right, but not quite yet, you know?

I just re-read your ending and I liked it a lot better than the first time I took a look at it.

-Julio
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It does seem thin to me also. I think we're missing about 5 people.

Sandra


I believe a lot of players left after their characters got killed. I can understand why, but yeah, I expected more comments on the final posting.
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Final tracksheet update in place.

Game thread locked.

Going to start a thread called Shiva - Post-Mortem  later today and we can use that for a bitching session.  The idea is of the Post-Mortem is to find out what's went right and what went wrong with the game - without naming any specific names.

George was going to send me a copy of the script in Final Draft.  Once I have that I can post the rtf version and we can talk about rewrites.
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Hey, Cornetto, could you send me over a pdf one if you can? For some reason scripts are easier to read for me in that format.

--Julio
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Those are some funny endings, MBC girl. I'm still around, sometimes popping in and out quickly to check how things are going. . I can just imagine the rewrite.  


Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
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