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Lake Simply - Killer Discussion (currently 14328 views)
Dreamscale
Posted: July 8th, 2009, 1:15pm
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Wow! Lovisa leaves her house, only continue her ways. Wild! Giselle's last name was actually "Santiago", not "Silva". What was Coop doing with her passport? This sure is one sexually wild town!!! Nice effort.
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Toby_E
Posted: July 8th, 2009, 1:22pm
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Quoted from Dreamscale
Giselle's last name was actually "Santiago", not "Silva".
D'oh, edited! Well spotted mate
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grademan
Posted: July 8th, 2009, 1:37pm
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What will Dennis do with the stain on his image? How will Mark convince "Big Hairy Dick" Hawkins he's innocent? Does Doris explode with religious fervor? Can Chrisitan make change for a $5 bill? Does Tommy double up with Lovisa or is she losing interest? How doe Coop explain his lust triangle with Lovisa and Giselle and not end up in the pokey? Find out the answers to maybe some of these questions in T minus 48 hours or there abouts. Gary
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mcornetto
Posted: July 8th, 2009, 4:29pm
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The map is updated and it's grademan's turn. Well done Toby! You sure had Lovisa hopping around like a bunny. And an interesting turn that both she and Coop knew Giselle. And Hawkin's is next on Doris's sinner list. I wonder what Doris is doing with that list? Good stuff.
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grademan
Posted: July 8th, 2009, 8:17pm
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Do any of my fellow Killers want to review my draft? I can email a PDF to you.
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mcornetto
Posted: July 8th, 2009, 8:55pm
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Do any of my fellow Killers want to review my draft? I can email a PDF to you.
Sure, send it on over.
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Tommyp
Posted: July 8th, 2009, 10:15pm
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Yeah, send it to me too please.
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Grandma Bear
Posted: July 9th, 2009, 12:59am
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I guess when it's my turn, I'll have to keep the continuety going...
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grademan
Posted: July 9th, 2009, 9:20am
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Sorry Tommy and Pia, I didn't see your messages until after I posted the chapter this morning. Gary
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Dreamscale
Posted: July 9th, 2009, 11:17am
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Sounds like every single character is guilty here! I thought Coop was a good guy, but it sure doesn't look like it any longer. Tommy's quite the character, both giving and taking. Maybe Lovisa's rash will go away now that Tommy's shaved. Is Hawk dead? So many questions, so few answers...who is killing everyone here?
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mcornetto
Posted: July 9th, 2009, 4:34pm
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Well done grademan! Things get curiouser and curiouser. I'm wondering if Hawkins is really dead myself. The map is updated and JonnyBoy is up next. Maybe we'll learn a bit more about Doris and her list.
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Tommyp
Posted: July 9th, 2009, 8:18pm
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Looks great. Fun read. Expecting big things Jonnyboy...
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The boy who could fly
Posted: July 9th, 2009, 8:46pm
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OOOO Plot thickens, and tommy gets a shave, and Lovisa is back in the bedroom where she belongs
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Dreamscale
Posted: July 9th, 2009, 8:53pm
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Is someone going to shave Sherriff Hawkins' "big hairy dick", or did he lose all that hair in the explosion? Funny how this has trangressed into such a sexual story. Funny shit!!!!
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JonnyBoy
Posted: July 10th, 2009, 2:32pm
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I feel I'm betraying you all when I tell you that there's no sex in my entry at all! Following the explosive events of the last entry, I'm trying to cram in plot points and intrigue. I'm fighting against the word limit, having to cut a lot. Hopefully, what it lacks in nookie, it more than makes up for in drama. You WILL discover more about Doris, and there's also a revelation I'm pretty sure you won't see coming... I don't really understand why we're encouraged to email someone our post, but anyone want a read? I'm pretty much done with it, I'll post it later tonight.
Guess who's back? Back again?
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