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Dreamscale
Posted: July 8th, 2009, 1:15pm Report to Moderator
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Wow!  Lovisa leaves her house, only continue her ways.  Wild!

Giselle's last name was actually "Santiago", not "Silva".

What was Coop doing with her passport?

This sure is one sexually wild town!!!

Nice effort.
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Quoted from Dreamscale
Giselle's last name was actually "Santiago", not "Silva".


D'oh, edited! Well spotted mate


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What will Dennis do with the stain on his image? How will Mark convince "Big Hairy Dick" Hawkins he's innocent? Does Doris explode with religious fervor? Can Chrisitan make change for a $5 bill? Does Tommy double up with Lovisa or is she losing interest? How doe Coop explain his lust triangle with Lovisa and Giselle and not end up in the pokey? Find out the answers to maybe some of these questions in T minus 48 hours or there abouts.

Gary


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The map is updated and it's grademan's turn.

Well done Toby!  You sure had Lovisa hopping around like a bunny.  And an interesting turn that both she and Coop knew Giselle. And Hawkin's is next on Doris's sinner list.  I wonder what Doris is doing with that list?  Good stuff.

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Do any of my fellow Killers want to review my draft?  I can email a PDF to you.
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Quoted from grademan
Do any of my fellow Killers want to review my draft?  I can email a PDF to you.


Sure, send it on over.
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Yeah, send it to me too please.


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I guess when it's my turn, I'll have to keep the continuety going...    


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Sorry Tommy and Pia, I didn't see your messages until after I posted the chapter this morning.

Gary
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Dreamscale
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Sounds like every single character is guilty here!  I thought Coop was a good guy, but it sure doesn't look like it any longer.  Tommy's quite the character, both giving and taking.  Maybe Lovisa's rash will go away now that Tommy's shaved.  Is Hawk dead?

So many questions, so few answers...who is killing everyone here?
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Well done grademan! Things get curiouser and curiouser.  I'm wondering if Hawkins is really dead myself.  

The map is updated and JonnyBoy is up next.  Maybe we'll learn a bit more about Doris and her list.
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Looks great. Fun read. Expecting big things Jonnyboy...


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OOOO Plot thickens, and tommy gets a shave, and Lovisa is back in the bedroom where she belongs


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Dreamscale
Posted: July 9th, 2009, 8:53pm Report to Moderator
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Is someone going to shave Sherriff Hawkins' "big hairy dick", or did he lose all that hair in the explosion?

Funny how this has trangressed into such a sexual story.  Funny shit!!!!
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I feel I'm betraying you all when I tell you that there's no sex in my entry at all! Following the explosive events of the last entry, I'm trying to cram in plot points and intrigue. I'm fighting against the word limit, having to cut a lot.

Hopefully, what it lacks in nookie, it more than makes up for in drama. You WILL discover more about Doris, and there's also a revelation I'm pretty sure you won't see coming...

I don't really understand why we're encouraged to email someone our post, but anyone want a read? I'm pretty much done with it, I'll post it later tonight.


Guess who's back? Back again?

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