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I don't really understand why we're encouraged to email someone our post, but anyone want a read? I'm pretty much done with it, I'll post it later tonight.
Because in the first killer game people got a little out there with their entries, this discouraged the other people playing. Having a buddy read it catches those discouraging things and gives people a chance to fix things up before they post.
Well done, Johnny! Well done! A few typos and the like, but what you've written is solid...and defintely intriguing.
Glad old hairy dick Hawkins survived. Not sure what's up with Coop and Christian, but 1 thing I know is that Christian is a fucking freak and a half!
Also like the revelation of the mutilated body being Lovisa's love child.
All around, a very solid entry here. Nicely done!
Who's the fucking killer here? It's funny, cause after each entry, I have different feelings about who's killing everyone. I wonder if there are actually more than 1 killer?
Ho Ho Ho. The plot thickens. Well done Jonny. But did you mean it was the nest day or the next day. A good proofread from a buddy would have caught that. Just kidding - you did a good job.
The map has been updated and me is up next. I wonder how Lovisa is going to react to the new revelations.
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I wonder if there are actually more than 1 killer?
There might be - I wouldn't be surprised if I decided to pull that stunt.
Thanks guys. Hopefully this adds a little bit of depth to Doris...a bit of sympathy for her, perhaps, despite her prickly nature and violent actions? But what will happen to her once people start asking where the Reverend has gone?
What's going on with Mark's arrest? Is he guilty, or is he part of a bigger plan? Will Christian be allowed to leave town? Or does he know too much to be allowed to sail off into the sunset?
Also, I wouldn't be surprised if this leaves the door open for Tomas Stephenson to make an appearance at some point. After all, if Annika tracked her down, why couldn't he? And what will Tomas' reaction be to an eventual meeting? Joy, shock...or anger?
Three characters are now being slated for an untimely demise in round 2. However, to spice things up a bit, at the end of round 2 a discovery will be made. One of the four characters that are dead will be found to be actually alive. Which character is it? And most importantly, could that character be the killer?
Nice entry Jonny, well done mate. Originally when you said that Lovisa's other child was called Tomas I thought it was the Tommy from the story... That would have been seriously fucked up!!
But yeah, good entry, nice backstory for Doris. And I like the plan for the next round Cornetto, great idea.
Lets hope my character gets out of jail soon as well
Originally when you said that Lovisa's other child was called Tomas I thought it was the Tommy from the story... That would have been seriously fucked up!!
That's a good point, actually. The names Tomas and Tommy ARE too similar, If Tomas were to turn up (which of course is by no means certain). then that could be confusing.
If no-one has a problem with it, I'm gonna go back and change the name 'Tomas' to something else.
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Just kidding - you did a good job. 
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