I have it in my mind that there have been two stewards (one dead) and a driver?

I feel like I'm not really part of this. My character is dead and I haven't written anything since the beginning.  

Quoted from Grandma Bear I feel like I'm not really part of this. My character is dead and I haven't written anything since the beginning.

I'm dead, too. There's a fly charm floating in a cup somewhere and I still don't have a handle on Darren and Darren; so don't feel bad. All M cared about was completing her mission to save P. Can she do it beyond the grave or "cold storage"?  

Sandra

Darren,

Really nice job of pulling a lot together here. I'm going to read your post again to make sense of it all.

Who is Darren's daughter?

Thanks a bunch. Excellent work.  

Sandra

I haven't read it yet, but it's Pia's turn.

Pia, at least you almost got into a Menage and you also made Sandra's character so horny that it ended up getting her killed.

Wow. How exciting!  Excellent work Darren!

Good work Darren.

Quoted from mcornetto Wow. How exciting!  Excellent work Darren!

... and that follows on Jeff's post. Poor Sandra and Pia. We're in the middle of a bunch of "guy-think". Here I am, trying to save "P" from getting into a relationship with "A", get back together with her Ex, by using the armour of "D", and well...

Hey, "X" is "X"...

Whatchya gonna do? He comes 'round and yada-yada-yada...  

He's very cute and attractive though. I have to admit. I do have this "thing" for him-- even in all his uncouthedness.  

Sandra

Quoted from Sandra Elstree. Darren, Really nice job of pulling a lot together here. I'm going to read your post again to make sense of it all. Who is Darren's daughter? Thanks a bunch. Excellent work.   Sandra

Cheers.

The daughter is the girl killed on set in Electric Dreamer's (Brett) back story. I pulled on that thread for C.

I got a bit lost on some of the previous plots involving the menage and fly charm and stuff so went with some of the other established threads after the camera was wiped.

Quoted from darrentomalin Cheers. The daughter is the girl killed on set in Electric Dreamer's (Brett) back story. I pulled on that thread for C. I got a bit lost on some of the previous plots involving the menage and fly charm and stuff so went with some of the other established threads after the camera was wiped.

Really good job, Darren. I just really need to get "a feel" for who I "almost" had sex with in cold storage.   I feel like such a whore!

Sandra

Got some action going on... better untie me to defuse the bomb :p

Quoted from Zanej Got some action going on... better untie me to defuse the bomb :p

Didn't "P" already do that?

Sandra

She saw it, but didn't touch it.

There's been some really darn good work from Darren in the last post. One thing I would ask from everyone, though is:

Can't we have more character work?

It feels like everything is driven by "utensils used in killing" and "sex" and "I dun even know what the hell"...

You guys are smart and I know that. I'd like to see more out of you. I think you are capable of more, but I feel like you are "skating over the surface". (Due to your talents).

For instance: I saw three gentlemen in the last segment who apparently worked together, but I saw that:

They didn't really collaborate. (If they had, then some of the troubles would have been caught by one, I think).

Guys, you have to collaborate more.

Anyways, I want to lighten the mood. I've been working ESL today and I incorporate my Hebrew into studies; so here's some fun to hopefully make you forget your troubles in life and on this bloomin' train.  



Sandra