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Well, that's the thing. I (get it? Ha ha funny...) thought she was great and would probably do a good job, but the macho asshole-dom was bound to take over in really short order.
I would say approx 30 mph so roughly 2 hrs remaining till arrival in union station
Thank you so very much, Zane. I'm working very hard with your character by the way, as well as others including my very loved "E". I'm having a hard time because I actually did get used to the letters and some I could interchange readily, but a few gave me the shift.
So yes, I'm working very hard. Whoever wants to help me, just let me know and tomorrow I'll send you what I've got. I truly believe it really works and I'd love for fresh eyes to see what might not be evident or clear enough. I'm very excited about the studies I've done on this script, what I've learned, and the whole thing in general.
You can send it over to me for a read b4 posting id you want. The end is coming like the way it worked with people dying leaving 1 person to sleeper car no one can monitor adother.
I'd be completely open to reading whatever you send, Sandra. That is, if whatever you've done is sent within the next hour or so. Time restrictions... =(
If not, I'll read it along with everyone else as the game nears its conclusion. *cue dramatic music*
I'd be completely open to reading whatever you send, Sandra. That is, if whatever you've done is sent within the next hour or so. Time restrictions... =(
If not, I'll read it along with everyone else as the game nears its conclusion. *cue dramatic music*
I will send it over. Please make whatever cuts you know are needed.
There aren't likely to be many. You and I have very different styles of writing, Sandra. But, I'll be happy to help where I can.
And, Darren, you wrote the scene so you know best. I always figured that I could kill anybody so I must've been rushed, tossed out of the train, then the stuff got ransacked with the free time. Crazy thoughts. And, a line from 'The Usual Suspects' keeps coming to mind, "But you didn't see him die." =)
There aren't likely to be many. You and I have very different styles of writing, Sandra. But, I'll be happy to help where I can.
And, Darren, you wrote the scene so you know best. I always figured that I could kill anybody so I must've been rushed, tossed out of the train, then the stuff got ransacked with the free time. Crazy thoughts. And, a line from 'The Usual Suspects' keeps coming to mind, "But you didn't see him die." =)
Thank you so much! I didn't even expect to hear from anyone tonight. It's in very rough shape right now, but I need a pair of fresh eyes. I spent a lot of time studying the script last night and wanted to try and balance character, intrigue, yes ...and fun and especially logic with why this was taking place.
I'd like to see the train in serious danger before we enter the next scene-- where if it doesn't stop, the Third Party wins so to speak.
Just a heads up, Sandra. You explained your intentions in the E-mail, but you didn't actually send your scene. That is, unless you sent it separately or are waiting. But, whenever you send it, you're welcome. =)