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That was nice piece of revenge you hung on my character background! Yay, a bomb. Cross that off the murder mystery laundry list. Nice work.
E.D.
Ha ha thanks for giving a lovely little thread to pull on with the mysterious death on set! It was either that or the diamond heist thing (forget the character now)
Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages. https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-comedy/m-1624410571/
That's a damn shame. My number one choice for the MK was just taken out... by an overpass? Lol.
Sorry, Gabe.
Overall, not too shabby, Brett. A nice, solid entry. =)
-Sean
EDIT: After re-reading it, you've got me curious as to who moved Jeff's corpse into the sleeper... That must've been a messy, time-consuming job. The killer's getting sloppy in his old age... *hint hint*
Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages. https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-comedy/m-1624410571/
Awww, come on now, buddy. Where's the love? I did give you lots of jokes and ladders to climb. And, you even caught the killer! But then you lost your head.
EDIT: After re-reading it, you've got me curious as to who moved Jeff's corpse into the sleeper... That must've been a messy, time-consuming job. The killer's getting sloppy in his old age... *hint hint*
*clears his throat* I'm a spry 50. Especially for a producer.
Glad you picked up on the movement and Gabe catching MK "in the act". The frame job might've stuck if Gabe didn't hear those pesky footsteps. Dear old MK has only four schleps left he/she can set up to take the rap.
I liked the idea of a circumstantial murder after catching the killer in the act. I thought it would be a nice reversal for the reader. We know a murder's coming when folks talk to people that aren't described. Giving the victim the drop on MK would be a neat twist, IMO. Then you're thinking, "Well, how is MK gonna get away this time?"
I must also give credit where it's due. I cribbed/modified a death scene from "Narrow Margin". The 1990 murder mystery film that takes place mostly on a train.
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