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Murder on the Simply Express - Killer Discussion (currently 33237 views)
Electric Dreamer
Posted: November 29th, 2011, 9:30am
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Before reading the latest entry, I noticed the little "E" icon was greyed out.
Then I read the post and saw that Michael got the axe!
I thought I was dead while reading Jordan's script! LOL, nice one Cornie.
And Jordon's neat reversal had me convinced there for a moment, to boot!
Should you vote for me as Master Killer, I pledge the following:
I'll include a flashback of each and everyone and how they pissed me off.
For instance...
That make up dude that touched my chair on set once? Yeah, he had to die.
Did you see his enormous dirty hands? He's like a Johnny Bench hobo.
Anyone interested in having a vote for their favorite death too?
Cheers,
E.D.
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: November 29th, 2011, 11:18am
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Good times, Jordan. I almost wish the post-flashback stuff had gone on a little longer because just a sequence in a dark hallway is always cool. Otherwise, it was good stuff.
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DarrenJamesSeeley
Posted: November 29th, 2011, 12:42pm
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Quoted from mcornetto
Good one Jordan, even though it meant my characters head was split in two. And know we know who the final two are. While we are waiting for the last two to take their turn and develop story, you can vote for the Master Killer. To do so - PM me with either one of these two subjects...Electric Dreamer is the Master Killer or ReneC is the Master Killer Whomever you elect will write the last post of the game and conclude the script. I will announce the results of the vote after Zanej posts. DarrenJamesSeeley is up next.
It'll probably be done sometime today or tommorow.
I'm in a debate whether I should go into Hitchcock territtory or make Tom Six cry like a bitch.
ReneC
Posted: November 29th, 2011, 1:05pm
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And then there were two.
Since E.D. has started campaigning, I'll just say if I'm the master killer I pledge to make as much money off of it as I can. A lucrative fourteen-part mini-series deal on HBO. T-shirts that read "I survived the Simply Express". Mouse pads with provocative silhouettes of the ladies. Mugs that read "Simply Express: fastest train to a self-defense plea".
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 29th, 2011, 1:58pm
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Jordon, I really did appreciate your post. The visuals were wonderful and because I sometimes skim slugs, I missed the part with the real "I" you had as a flashback. I at first thought it was a flash forward. In any case, nicely done. As far as the master killer goes, it's weird, but I had a dream last night. I don't remember a lot, (maybe I will later) but here it was and it was like a real movie. There was a shot of Electric Dreamer from the back on the right hand side. He was sitting down, confessing to someone. He was wearing a grey shirt with a bit of a tiny speckled quality to it (I'm not sure of the fabric) but it was really rich looking. His hair was combed neatly, he was in a somber mood, regretting, but in no way tearful. Based on this dream, I vote E.D. as the Master Killer. Sandra
A known mistake is better than an unknown truth.
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Electric Dreamer
Posted: November 29th, 2011, 2:33pm
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Based on this dream, I vote E.D. as the Master Killer.
My duplicitous avatar and I thank you, m'dear.
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Electric Dreamer
Posted: November 30th, 2011, 11:45am
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Quoted from mcornetto
While we are waiting for the last two to take their turn and develop story, you can vote for the Master Killer. To do so - PM me with either one of these two subjects...Electric Dreamer is the Master Killer or ReneC is the Master Killer Whomever you elect will write the last post of the game and conclude the script.
A couple quick questions about the voting.
Is voting restricted to Killer participants?
Are the candidates allowed to vote?
E.D.
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mcornetto
Posted: November 30th, 2011, 3:14pm
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A couple quick questions about the voting. Is voting restricted to Killer participants? Are the candidates allowed to vote? E.D.
Anyone can vote.
Candidates can vote.
And Darren, what's up?
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DarrenJamesSeeley
Posted: November 30th, 2011, 10:45pm
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Quoted from mcornetto
And Darren, what's up?
I'm right in the middle of it. Connecting dots, crossing t's.
ReneC
Posted: December 1st, 2011, 2:36pm
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What the--?
You made me squirm, Darren. Not easy to do.
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mcornetto
Posted: December 1st, 2011, 3:23pm
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Good one, DJS! And Zanej is up. It's been a long journey folks and you've all done very well. I'll update things later when I get home from work. Don't forget to vote for the Master Killer. To do so - PM me with either one of these two subjects...Electric Dreamer is the Master Killer or ReneC is the Master Killer It's too late to vote once Zanej posts.
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Electric Dreamer
Posted: December 1st, 2011, 4:53pm
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I'd say DJS filled my blood hole sucking quota for the rest of the year.
Yikes, that was a tad intense.
I suppose there's no rules against maiming the master killer candidates.
Zane, please wake us up from our "shared nightmare" about the Chef.
E.D.
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: December 1st, 2011, 7:07pm
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DJS, you really know how to shake things up. You're my kinduv man.
All bloody hell, but a pussycat deep down inside.
First things first:
Quoted from mcornetto
Usual The stuff you did was good but you needed to kill a player character. Not the CHEF who is a non-player character.
Aha! a non existent character has just been involved in some hideous activity!
And...
The Chef and the Female attendant were already dead, chopped up into M&M size peanuts and packed away in suitcases in Warm Storage. Also, it wasn't *just* Swordfish that was being served earlier in the game. It tasted like seafood because it was mixed in with the seafood.. That was what I always thought Sandra
You know what
that means:
ZOMBIES!!!!
Sandra
A known mistake is better than an unknown truth.
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mcornetto
Posted: December 1st, 2011, 7:13pm
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The Chef wasn't dead, is on the list of characters but wasn't even mentioned until a few posts ago. Darren had my permission to kill him.
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DarrenJamesSeeley
Posted: December 1st, 2011, 8:25pm
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You know what
that means:
ZOMBIES!!!!
Sandra
Only if your character sprang to life and chomped on Rene's skull.
Believe me Sandy... I went easy on you. I almost considered a full on three way necrcophelia S & M ...and feeding one of the deceased a coconut cremed pie, but that was pushing it...
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