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rdhay
Posted: December 1st, 2011, 9:53pm Report to Moderator
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That was pushing it?? I think you passed 'pushing it' with the first slug:p Man, that was seriously intense.
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Sandra Elstree.
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Only if your character sprang to life and chomped on Rene's skull.
Believe me Sandy... I went easy on you. I almost considered a full on three way necrcophelia S & M ...and feeding one of the deceased a coconut cremed pie, but that was pushing it...



Funny you should say that, Darren. I did think it was being foreshadowed that she would be "kissed to life" as Snow White. But I quickly shot that down because I knew the rules didn't allow for that. It is an interesting note though, from the perspective of writing it. If that crossed your mind, too. It's a bit of goods.

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Hey didn't know it was my turn. Gonna be hard to follow will try and get it done asap so get those votes in.
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mcornetto
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Everything is updated.
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Zanej
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Sent entry to Michael, just waiting for the OK. Hope everyone has their votes for Master Killer in.
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Zanej
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Script is up, both are armed which is dangerous...
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mcornetto
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Good work Zane.  I'll update things in the morning because I'm just about to head up to bed.

Congrats on everyone for getting to the end of this killer game - it was a long difficult train trip but we're pulling in the station.

You will know who the Master Killer is when they post the exciting conclusion. He knows who he is.   I urge the person who has not been told they are the Master Killer to maintain silence on the subject until the Master Killer posts.

Stay tuned.    
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Nice work, Zane!

What a surprisingly sedate exchange between those two.
You could call it, "My Dinner with Master Killer".
I guess the Master Killer is biding his time...
OR counting up all the money he's gonna steal!

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Has it reached the end yet? I was waiting for the end so I could read the whole at once instead of snippets.


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The Master Killer has been voted on and chosen.  He will post the conclusion on Monday.  So, yes, it's nearly the end.
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Sandra Elstree.
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Good work, Zane. Good work everyone. It's been a long ride and we've seen quite the spread.

I've enjoyed seeing a variety of talent on display here: some leaning more toward humorous, others toward the heavy violence and still others, well... you know what inevitably happens in Simply Town. ...it all builds up and gets channeled through Jeff.  

Still awaiting the the end. Hope it happens with a nice subtle bang.

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Mr. Blonde
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What good are choices if they're all bad?

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As long as whoever the killer is doesn't hang up a pay phone, look up into the sky and fly away while Rage Against the Machine is playing, I think the ending will be good times.


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Zanej
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Matrix didn't do it for you
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Mr. Blonde
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What good are choices if they're all bad?

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Hell no. It would've been better if he blended in with the crowd on the street and walked away. I mean, how did they miss that opportunity to pay off the scene from earlier when he kept bumping into people? It was perfect but they fucked up and went full retard on the ending.


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mcornetto
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An excellent ending to what was a fun little game.  Thanks Brett, our new Master Killer.

I hope everyone learned something and had fun.

Cheers!
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