He might not have been sent to protect everyone?

Okay so I've wrote my bit but I don't think it's as big as most, is this a problem?

As long as it gets the job done, the rule of screenwriting is "less is more" right?

How's it going, alffy?

I'm done but just going to give it a once over.  Be posted today, Michael.  

Sorry if it seems a long wait but due to time zones I receive your emails in the middle of the night lol.

Okay posted.  Like I said, it's a bit on the short side but I didn't want to move too many people about.

Dang, now both my characters are dead.

Not a bad entry, alffy. Nice work on that kill.

alffy, Character Description????


and guys...the list of characters I give you in the email  are characters that can be the Killer.  You are not supposed to kill these characters.  

Everything is updated.  Grademan is up next.

I'm on it guys!

Seems I fucked up twice lol.  Thought  I'd posted my character description and now I've deleted it.  Best write it again.  Sorry, Michael, I thought it was a list of possible victims.  Hope I haven't killed the killer?

LESTER MARLEY  (35) works for the OPEA. (Off Planet Enforcement Agency)

A large stocky man with skills in firearms and hand to hand combat.  He is a veteran of the War of the Middle East.

Proud of working class background, Lester Joined the army from school and worked his way up to the rank of Lieutenant.  Posted in Syria during the War of the Middle East conflict he showed his courage.  He led his platoon in to the City of Damascus and rescued the captured Greek Politician Nickos Selphandidis.  After which he was officially posted home but sources suggest he was hand picked to lead secret rescue missions inside Taliban held countries.

After the conflict he was appraoched by the OPEA and offered employment and became an Off Planet Enforcer.  His role is to protect Politician's during their visits to Mars.

Three times.  You invented a term, OPEA.  

But who's counting.

Oopsie lol.

Hey guys! It's in review, hopefully this afternoon.

Here's my second character.

Franklin Ford, 30s, Liaison to Special Envoy Cantrell

A short muscular man with dark skin.

A native of New York’s urban decay. His mother abandoned him early and he never knew his father. He wandered the city until he found refuge in a shelter run by Elliot Cantrell (during his one year sabbatical in the slums of New York) and was enthralled at Elliot’s passion for saving Earth. Elliot realized the worth of Franklin and hired him as a liaison which included training for valet, communications, protocols and bodyguard duties. When Elliot needs something, he provides it without question.