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grademan
Posted: September 19th, 2012, 9:51pm Report to Moderator
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Hey Matt,

That was good. When Adam the only person to offer a way out is blown away and ALAN is offline, things are looking like mayhem! Ain't nobody leaving. Nope.

Give her a go, George!

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Nicely done, I like where this is going. Jenna and Valentina? Was not expecting that from my own character. Hopefully George spares her...
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George Willson
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Action, too much exposition, and not a nice way to go from my end. Deeper and deeper goes the rabbit hole. I went early enough this time around to give everyone something interesting.


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Solid contribution, George. The curtain's pulled all the way back now...or is it?


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Mr. Blonde
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You weren't kidding about too much exposition, George, but it was definitely a good set-up for The Boy.

I like the ground-to-death death. Reminds me of the newspaper guy death from "Tomorrow Never Dies". Not Jonathan Pryce, but one of the lackey guys.

Anyway, good stuff and are there any sections of this Mars facility that aren't completely fucked at the moment? It seems like every section has been completely destroyed. Good times. =)


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Nice addition George..

love the subtle Fempiror plug.



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Quoted from Penoyer79
Nice addition George..

love the subtle Fempiror plug.





Well, I figured it is the grand unanswered Fempiror question, so why not? For what it's worth, I also ref Star Trek and Dr. Who. Of course, there's a Who reference is there that is exceptionally subtle and not in the laundry list of article titles. Kudos to whoever catches it. And then, of course, there's the deliberate aside that comments on the lack of contribution of Patricia and Bernard to the overall plot.


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Okay. I get it. If you want a character to live, keep someone close at the end. Likewise, if you want somebody dead have them wander off by himself.
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mcornetto
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Excellent entry, George.  

I have to rush out this morning to a very important meeting - so I can't update things immediately or send a email.  

The boy who can fly is up next.   Will send email and update when I get back in a few hours.
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Nice entry, George!

Flyboy's sure got his work cut out for him following that up.


I can't live the buttoned-down life like you. I want it all. The dizzying highs, the terrifying lows, the creamy middles. Sure, I may offend some of the blue bloods with my cocky stride and musky odors. Oh, I'll never be the darling of the so-called "city fathers," who cluck their tongues, stroke their beards and talk about what's to be done with this Homer Simpson?
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I'm at work, won't be able to start till I get home, things will go beyond crazy I can tell you thAt


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Mr. Blonde
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I swear to god, if you kill one of my characters (If you do, kill Burt. Lol) and force me to go after you AGAIN...


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It will be bat shit crazy, like if the Texas chainsaw massacre, natural born killers and from dusk till dawn convinced a child, then had an abortion but the abortion survived and is now pissed off and is ready to unleash hell !!


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Everything is updated.  Flyboy has been notified.
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Anybody happen to have a running list of which areas have been destroyed and which ones haven't?


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