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Martian Mayhem (Killer Game Discussion Thread) (currently 27147 views)
Mr. Blonde
Posted: September 27th, 2012, 2:21pm
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That's why I threw the final scene in there. Mars' atmosphere is nothing to him, either... That said, I'm not a very out-of-the-box type guy.
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ReneC
Posted: September 27th, 2012, 2:55pm
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Oh, I know what to do with him.
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: September 27th, 2012, 3:18pm
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Oh, I know what to do with him.
If it's not him choking to death on a peanut, I'm going to be very disappointed... =)
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grademan
Posted: September 27th, 2012, 5:02pm
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There we go folks. Thanks George for the review. Gary
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mcornetto
Posted: September 27th, 2012, 5:13pm
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Well done, Gary. I liked that you tried to bring a little bit of the original universe back. nawazm11 is up next, I believe everyone is in the same dome - someone correct me if i'm wrong. Will update when I'm done with my work day.
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Penoyer79
Posted: September 27th, 2012, 6:09pm
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never would have guessed Patricia would turn into Sigourney Weaver.... so its down to the final 4.... Rene, Blonde, George, and myself with characters still alive.
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: September 27th, 2012, 9:14pm
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never would have guessed Patricia would turn into Sigourney Weaver....
That ended up happening with a female character when we did "Murder on the Simply Express", too... =)
EDIT: Good times, Gary, and a very quick turnaround. =)
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grademan
Posted: September 28th, 2012, 12:25pm
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Much easier to write the second time. My words just flowed once I thought of Patricia as getting in touch with her inner bitch. The ALAN thing is there if you want. I figured if Jenna died, Marty would be after Patricia like a horny dog. The big thing is they cooperated for the first time - looking back that may not have been wise. I left them together in the same dome accidentally. So your choice on the kill! I wanted Marty dead but figured killing Jenna would get to him. Good luck with the last episodes!
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Penoyer79
Posted: September 28th, 2012, 3:22pm
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Marty has turned into the main antag... killing him there would have been a mistake.
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: September 28th, 2012, 3:42pm
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I've noticed that as this game has gone along (and all of them for that matter), we've actually begun to develop some kind of a narrative, ridiculous as it is. A few more of these games and some writers here may be fit for TV. Lol.
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mcornetto
Posted: September 28th, 2012, 6:25pm
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Everything is updated. The last known dome for all the characters is the Spaceport, so nawazm11 gets to decide who gets it next. I notified him last night.
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nawazm11
Posted: September 28th, 2012, 9:48pm
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I'll probably have it finished by tonight, guys.
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Penoyer79
Posted: September 28th, 2012, 11:38pm
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I've noticed that as this game has gone along (and all of them for that matter), we've actually begun to develop some kind of a narrative, ridiculous as it is. A few more of these games and some writers here may be fit for TV. Lol.
its too bad we didnt think of "The Artifact" to begin with,
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: September 29th, 2012, 9:30am
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its too bad we didnt think of "The Artifact" to begin with,
My favorite part is that each character has their own style and motivation (in a way). If each character's reactions were written by the person who created them, they'd all have some kind of an arc and certainly enough backstory to be interesting. That's probably the coolest part of this game.
Although I will say that if there's a next Killer game down the line, it would be interesting if kill were not allowed during round 1 so each character really gets a chance to become developed.
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alffy
Posted: September 29th, 2012, 1:53pm
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Just read your entry Gary. Very good action and loved the spiders. Very Alien like.
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