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Martian Mayhem (Killer Game Discussion Thread) (currently 27136 views)
The boy who could fly
Posted: September 29th, 2012, 7:41pm
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Getting pretty action packed which I like, funny seeing how this is going, has a lot of creativity going on now.
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Penoyer79
Posted: September 29th, 2012, 9:32pm
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yeah but Leon Napier didnt turn out as sleezy and tyranical as i had envisioned him...he's actually turned out to be slightly heroic and helpful. i had all sorts of nasty things planned for him until michael changed the batting order.... now i wont get to write until he's dead...
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: September 29th, 2012, 9:55pm
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yeah but Leon Napier didnt turn out as sleezy and tyranical as i had envisioned him...he's actually turned out to be slightly heroic and helpful. i had all sorts of nasty things planned for him until michael changed the batting order.... now i wont get to write until he's dead...
That's nothing. I created Burt Bell with the sole arc to kill Leon. But, since I was painted into a corner on my turn and I HAD to kill Franklin, I couldn't complete his arc because now they have to work together to kill Marty. My turn was the last time that would actually be possible, before they all knew about his powers.
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mcornetto
Posted: September 29th, 2012, 10:49pm
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How's it going, nawazm11?
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nawazm11
Posted: September 29th, 2012, 10:53pm
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I should be finishing it up in the next few hours
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: September 29th, 2012, 10:58pm
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Looks like I'll have to wait until the morning to see who the final three left alive are... *cue dramatic music*
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Penoyer79
Posted: September 29th, 2012, 11:07pm
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That's nothing. I created Burt Bell with the sole arc to kill Leon. But, since I was painted into a corner on my turn and I HAD to kill Franklin, I couldn't complete his arc because now they have to work together to kill Marty. My turn was the last time that would actually be possible, before they all knew about his powers.
no shit? oh the irony. that's pretty funny actually.
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: September 29th, 2012, 11:11pm
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no shit? oh the irony. that's pretty funny actually.
Oh, yeah. In Burt's description and the first scene of my second turn, that's what I was setting up and I would have done it but Michael threw a monkey into the wrench (by forcing us to kill who's alone) and killed it. Not his fault, though. That's an interesting way to write, although if you get painted into that corner, it makes your scene highly predictable. Can't please everyone. =)
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nawazm11
Posted: September 29th, 2012, 11:57pm
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Hey, guys. I'm finished, anyone want to give it a read before I send it in?
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nawazm11
Posted: September 30th, 2012, 2:04am
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Thanks Michael for the read. It's up, guys. Hopefully nobody is angry with what I did.
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mcornetto
Posted: September 30th, 2012, 2:51am
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Good job, nawazm11! Alan has returned.... Penoyer79 is up next. He doesn't have a choice about which character to kill - though he has a difficult one to get rid of. He will be followed directly by ReneC who is fortunate enough to write our conclusion.
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grademan
Posted: September 30th, 2012, 7:51am
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M Nawaz, Grittier than mine, I like it. Interesting stuff-- Jenna was the power? -- cool. Looks like Marty's viagra wore off and Patricia's PMS seem to be over. Good to see ALAN back. Nice. T minus 10 minutes.
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: September 30th, 2012, 12:38pm
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Well, Burt completed his arc which means he can go ahead and die now (after Marty, of course). I did like the emergency escape pod DEM but I was sad about all subtlety disappearing. Lol. Good stuff, though, and now each character is on a level playing field. =)
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alffy
Posted: September 30th, 2012, 2:13pm
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Hey Mohammad, good entry. I liked the tension before Leon lost his head, so to speak. 3 fight for 1 space in the pod then?
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Penoyer79
Posted: September 30th, 2012, 3:01pm
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Thanks Michael for the read. It's up, guys. Hopefully nobody is angry with what I did.
you killed both my characters focker! Jk lol
but at least you left me an easy lay-up for my entry.
i should have this done by tonight... barring Football doesnt consume me.
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