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Penoyer79
Posted: October 1st, 2012, 4:50pm Report to Moderator
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Chaos isn't a pit, it's a ladder.

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to be fair... Leon was the tool.


and dont get your panties in a twist...im almost done.
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Penoyer79
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Posted.

That worked much better than my other draft.

I tried not to be too predictable, but at some point you have to let these things just write themselves.
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mcornetto
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Good work Penoyer79.  Just thought the last sentence wasn't clear.  Who has the artifact?

ReneC is up next.  Everything is updated and he's been emailed.
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Penoyer79
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Marty has the artifact...i believe there is a line that states this after Alan is summoned.
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I'm on it. Or will be, tomorrow. It's late. I know what I'm going to do, just need to write it (while pretending to work).


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George Willson
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Ooooh, so how will Rene handle it? Will Patricia triumph to give us the victorious good ending? Or will Marty win so we get the sequel worthy ending where Marty goes to earth to wreak eternal havoc? Find out next time...


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Good one Penoyer79! Those imps are nasty and Burt died with action hero cool. And nice use of the spiders. Marty is certainly fired up. It's time to end the mayhem.
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I'm rooting for Marty, I always like it when the bad guy wins!


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I'm rooting for Marty, I always like it when the bad guy wins!


Me too. Moriarty, I mean, Marty deserves a good win.


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I'm not so guys. I only like bad guys winning when they deserve to win. You know, when they're been smarter the whole time. Marty hasn't been smarter as much as he's been tougher.

My vote is for Patricia to find a way to take him down. Although, I would like to say that it would be cool to have the escape pod damaged and not allow whoever lives to get back to Earth, to have them stranded on Mars.


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Posted. Rush job, but I'm happy with it.


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Dude that was awesome.
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Quoted from Penoyer79
Dude that was awesome.


Yeah, me too.
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mcornetto
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Excellently done, Rene.  A conclusion worthy of the newest Master Killer.  Congratulations.

I'll tally up the Lexicon after work but it looks like Alan came up as the clear winner there.

Well done, everyone.  Now go and OWC.  
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Mr. Blonde
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That was good times, Rene. Very fun and an ending that somehow... fit (is that the right word?) into the story and offered a satisfying conclusion. =)


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