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The boy who could fly
Posted: September 7th, 2012, 7:50am Report to Moderator
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Okay, I'm pretty much done, but I'm tired so I will finish it when I get up. I got most people seperated so it's not one big clump, so it should be easy for the next person, but I did have to break a rule, but I think from now on it will be pretty easy to manage. And yes, this entry will be pretty digusting and depraved, I should get my ass to church!


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Mr. Blonde
Posted: September 7th, 2012, 9:28am Report to Moderator
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And, I have to be the one that goes after you? Whenever I write, my characters are very subdued! Damn you! Lol. =)


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i cant help but wonder how this would have turned out if it were Martians killing the crew memebers

i think a "Survivor" aspect would be an interesting tweak to this format. everyone creates a character they hope will be the last one standing.  but intead of killing eachother... its an x-factor killing them off....
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Valentina Santiago, late thirties.

She is the multi billionaire financing the mars project. Born into a wealthy family, her father owned and ran a science research company in her home town of Zaragoza Spain called "Descubrimiento"

Her mother died during child birth and was raised soley by her father who got her into science and business.

By the time she was fifteen the company was worth over one hundred billion dollars, mostly due to discovering the cure for aids. By the time she was twenty the company was worth almost five hundred billion dollars, and when her father died six years later in a mysterious boating accident, she became head of Descubrimiento.

Known to be vicious and cold, she is a true business woman who never takes no for an answer and always gets what she wants and has the money and power to destroy anyone who gets in her way. She cares more about profit than a cause.

She is also known for her sexual exploits taking on many lovers of both genders, she is also heavy into sadomastic sexual activities including bondage and mutilation. Some of her physical alterations are having her tongue forked like a snake and her eyes dyed yellow.

She financed the mars project in secret, only a select few know of her involvment, and even fewer know the real reason why she is doing this.


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Well, that was quite an entry, a few typos but it made me jump a bit at the end.  

The plot thickens....

Blonde is up.

I'm about to head out for a few, I'll update things when I get back in a few hours.  
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I have a feeling Valentina may know the Napier family quite well.
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Interesting entry. And by interesting I mean WTF, dude?


I can't live the buttoned-down life like you. I want it all. The dizzying highs, the terrifying lows, the creamy middles. Sure, I may offend some of the blue bloods with my cocky stride and musky odors. Oh, I'll never be the darling of the so-called "city fathers," who cluck their tongues, stroke their beards and talk about what's to be done with this Homer Simpson?
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How the fuck do I compete with this? Dialogue is what I do best and I have to do better than literal forked tongues, ripping still-beating hearts out of people's chests? Come on, now... That said, the new girl is certainly an interesting addition and a complete wacko... but different and exciting are good times.

EDIT: I think I may have cracked this one but I need to create five different documents to keep track of this. May have it up tonight. May not.



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I wanted to take things down a darker path, make it a little more sinister and I thought Valentina would add a more sadistic and Immoral tone to the story, and also I thought we needed reason for this mission. I think there are a lot of possibilites, curious to see where it will go from here.


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Well, I'm going to continue to take things down a darker path with my new character and we're about to go into lockdown. I just hope I can make it stick.


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Everything is updated.

Everyone pretty much seems to be in the Crew and Guest Quarters.  

This is why you should use the Map Location in your slug, so you know if you're mixing it up or not.

(and btw I allowed a lot of additional moves for that turn so please don't try to convince me that allowing additional moves will spread people out)

Looking forward to reading what Blonde writes.
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WTF???

Oh, wow. I should've killed Jenna myself to avoid her having such a gruesome death... I'm still so bummed that she's gone...

Blonde, you must avenge me!
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Made the cuts. If anyone is interested in proofreading this for me, I'd appreciate it. If not, I'll post it right now.


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Burt Bell - Guard

As the guard who can get it for you, Bell operates like any profitable business should. He finds a group of people willing to buy and sell products at a price they're willing to pay. In the case of the prisoners, he trafficks in drugs of all kinds and charges as much as ten times the street value.

Of course, price gouging like this does not go unnoticed as Leon demands 40% of Bell's business just to operate. This was merely the final nail in the coffin for Bell who knows he should've been Captain of the Guards but was passed over for the promotion (and salary) for the rotten bastard Bernard Napier's son, Leon.

That said, being around drugs that much, the temptation was always there for Bell who broke the cardinal rule in a moment of weakness, "Never get high on your own supply". As a raging cocaine addict with an anti-Napoleon Complex (picking on people smaller than him because he knows he can beat them), he never was one for feeling anything genuine for another human being until he found Constance Harris. It was never made official to anyone but rumors swirled that he liked her, in one way or another, but hid behind his hulking 6'7", 286 physique of solid muscle. Thing is, no one knew for sure if he actually cared about her or if he just saw her as another untapped customer base.


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I can proofread it. Send it to my email.

Gary
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