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Dreamscale
Posted: April 23rd, 2013, 4:51pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Penoyer79
i know its been done before but lets cut to the chase of what we want...

Plane crash lands on a deserted island that has a bounty of lost pirate treasure...

you got isolation
dreamscales joe schmoe cast
sex appeal location
and a who-done-it killer with a motive (greed)

bam done.


Works for me.

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M.Alexander
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So basically it's Survivor meets Treasure Island and Scream.

Yikes.

Any mimes?

On a serious note, the island is a bad idea, IMO,  How about borrowing from wonkavites' script and make it a storage facility.   The entire story would take place in one night.





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Penoyer79
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umm id say scream/survivor is exactly what this whole thing is



its a slasher game with a beautiful location...that serves all of our purposes...

what else do you what?

we're not writing shakespear here...
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M.Alexander
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Quoted from Penoyer79
its a slasher game with a beautiful location...that serves all of our purposes...

what else do you want?


Originality.

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Dreamscale
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An island is a nice setting as it serves many purposes.  Cool setting, different areas, ability to be alone, the ocean, even chance of escape.

If we do this, I think we'll need a number of other characters that whoever is writing can utilize, kill, have island sex with, etc.  We need chickies for sure - maybe we should gte Stevie involved, as he's basically a chick already.  

What about that wild and crazy Pia chick?  She likes to play...
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orignality? in a slasher flick?

heh.... i think practicality is the way to go.

but thats just me..

ill let you guys decide.
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Quoted from Penoyer79
orignality? in a slasher flick?
heh.... i think practicality is the way to go.
but thats just me..
ill let you guys decide.


Slasher flick?   What happened to the hitmen!?



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Quoted from M.Alexander


Slasher flick?   What happened to the hitmen!?




slasher, hitmen...semantics... its still a killer game.
im just going off what dreamscale was suggesting...
as far as i know hitmen is still on the table..
mr blonde did say other ideas were welcome....

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Dreamscale
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Or we could all be Polar Bears and one by one, we kill and eat each other.  The dialogue would be very simple, I think that way.
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Polar Bears vs Mimes
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Dreamscale
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Quoted from M.Alexander


Polar Bears vs Mimes


Dialogue stays equally simple with the additions of the mimes.

I'd prefer my character to be an older male Polar Bear.  I think I can bring some pretty radical character arcs.

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I'd prefer my character to be an older male Polar Bear.  I think I can bring some pretty radical character arcs.





except Jeff don't smoke.
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Dreamscale
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Uhhhh...Jeff has been known to smoke, sorry to say.
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Seems you guys were busy while I was gone. That's a good thing. Conversation breeds opinions.

So, is that kind of what we've agreed on, now? Plane crashes on an island with some kind of mysterious treasure on it? Personally, I'd drop the treasure thing and just make it a survival thing. That's just me, though.

Michael seems interested in making it a storage facility. Do you have any additional plot to go with that, or are you kind of just spitballing ideas?

Jeff, if you want to try and get Pia and Stevie in here, by all means. I mean, this is not some game that's invitation only.

Penoyer, it's likely that the hitmen thing is out the window if we're doing the island thing. That's just a shade too convenient.

But, please try and keep things on topic for now, while we're still deciding what you'd like the game to actually be. Tomorrow, regardless of which game is inevitably chosen, I'm going to discuss a couple ground rules. =)


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i wouldnt say anything is agreed on yet...  we'll see what the masses want... and if we cant come to a consesus you can make an executive decision

i threw the gold in there for motive for people to start offing eachother... but we can do whatever

as for the island... i noticed 3 of the 4 games have been indoors... i figure we need to get out in the open again.... not to mention the fact when you got people stuck on an island - they cant just flee when the killing starts... everyone is forced to face it and deal with it.

and like jeff says - and i agree- when you got regular joe schmoes dealing with a survival situation -its lends itself more to character...

where as hitmen... it gets a little thin... especially when none of them are likely going to be afraid of dying
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