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A Day in My Life: Episode 2 (currently 2663 views)
Old Time Wesley
Posted: February 19th, 2004, 5:20pm
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Oh my god man, you went offline but this was a piece of art, it should be framed and given the award for best comedic script by a writer about the writer 3 cheers There were a few errors in the dialogue that I noticed but there outmatched by the overall value of this episode 10 out of 10
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the goose
Posted: February 24th, 2004, 4:26pm
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cool
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FSKessler
Posted: February 24th, 2004, 4:28pm
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You know I love this shit, Goose. It makes me laugh every time I read it.
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the goose
Posted: February 24th, 2004, 4:33pm
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How do I know you're not lying? Mmmm?
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FSKessler
Posted: February 24th, 2004, 4:35pm
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Yeah you're right. I'm a compulsive liar. I actually hate you, heh heh. (That was a joke...)
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the goose
Posted: February 24th, 2004, 4:36pm
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I'll bet it was a joke.
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Old Time Wesley
Posted: February 24th, 2004, 4:49pm
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The day this script sucks will be the same day Banana Chan gets old, which will probably be never
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the goose
Posted: February 25th, 2004, 2:17pm
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hello guest
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the goose
Posted: July 4th, 2004, 1:55pm
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Anyone else read this cinematic masterpiece?
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the goose
Posted: March 14th, 2005, 3:02pm
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Hey, don, could you please post this and the other day in my life episode with the latest one, please?
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Don
Posted: March 14th, 2005, 4:44pm
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So, what are you writing?
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Goose, I've merged the threads. Don
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Andy Petrou
Posted: May 1st, 2005, 7:33am
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HEY GOOSE!
Just read "A DAY IN MY LIFE" - really really enjoyed it!!!
Wow, you really do comedy well, not just that mind, but the action too was very good. I was constantly surprised at every turn.
First off, it was refreshing to have it set in London, though I did notice your reference to 'cell phones'<<americanisms lol! The accents + mannerisms were really good, Nickolai's, Mohamed's, Patel's, all of them. The names too were very imaginative, Crasher for example. Loved the way you capture the whole London vibe/scene>> the corner shop, dodge cab driver, alley way and bar etc.. just made it very real.
I liked the way the morning was an endless journey of events and mishaps. Really didn't expect all that to happen. My favourite thing about this script, was all the imaginary sequences.
LOVED THEM ! Just the kind of thing you'd want to see happen, but rarely gets done in a movie.
Also, really liked the way you added the music in, made it more movie like and was really able to hear it, if that makes sense.<<I'm not crazy!
I thought the ending was funny too, with the voice-overs, very original stuff there Goose, and I found the hospital scene, COUGH, the SEX.... sooooooooooooooo funny
I bet every man dreams about waking up to 3 gorgeous nurses, lol! So funny. Usually I think sex isn't a necessity to a movie, in fact its often a cheap ploy to stimulate the viewer in an 'easy' way, but the way you brought it into the mix, was like, way to go Goose! 4 months of nothin, and then he got somthin, lol!
Honestly, it was very good and I will check out part 2 soon.
Well done!!
Andy x
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