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Posted: October 13th, 2005, 11:11am Report to Moderator
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The President's unexplained visit to the trailer park by Daniel J. Toemta (Alfred Hitchcock) - Comedy - Three stories that takes place in a trailer park. For some reason the President of the united states is out for a drive in the countryside. He finally arrives at a trailer park. Alex has just gotten back from his vacation but when he comes back he finds out he has been robbed. And three adolescents who are trying to make a documentary about birds. - rtf, format


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Hello.

I'm the writer of The Presidents unexplained visit to the trailer park. This is my first script here at Simplyscripts. I got the idea for it one night when i was watching Seinfeld and i wrote out the rough draft in like 5 hours. I hope you enjoyed reading it and i'm looking forward to hearing what you thought of it.


When things go wrong I seem to be bad
But I'm just a soul whose intentions are good
Oh Lord, please don't let me be misunderstood

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Whaaaaaat the hell was that all about?

The only thing that was funny as the last job.  Pretty good way to end it.  Considering nothing else made sense or was funny.

Sorry to be harsh.. but meh.
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Alfred Hitchcock
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Really? Nothing else was at least a bit funny?


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I might read it...but im kinda not really wanting too, since you couldn't bother to type the title in with caps of reach ne wword....duh!


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man what a let down.

this was practicly the first script i ever finished into a final format and no one is even replying.


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How many scripts have you read and commented on, Hitch?

It's a two-way street.


Hey, it's my tiny, little IMDb!
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I might read it...but im kinda not really wanting too, since you couldn't bother to type the title in with caps of reach ne wword....duh!


I'm going to have to avoid reading anything you write because you seem so illiterate when you post.


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Alfred Hitchcock
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Quoted from bert
How many scripts have you read and commented on, Hitch?

It's a two-way street.


one. i really should read some more.


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