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Posted: June 9th, 2009, 5:47am Report to Moderator
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Dr. Raven Darktalon Blood Is... Unsympathetic by Dan Puckett - Comedy - Dr. Raven Darktalon Blood (of "Penny Arcade" fame) must restore balance to the Underhell before the new Whore-Queen of Festeria can activate the Apocalypse Device and destroy us all.  Whew. 99 pages - pdf, format


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this script is great. massively entertaining and the writing is brilliant. i know nothing of penny arcade nor am i into gaming in the least, but this was still funny as hell (underhell?) and a good read to boot. had a blast.

brav-o, good sir. brav-o.
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Thank you!  This is the author speaking.  Your compliments mean a lot to me.

If you have any suggestions about appropriate places to post a public-domain work like this, I'd love to hear them.  I want to put this screenplay out where lots of people can enjoy it.

Thanks again for your comments.
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Quoted from spring

If you have any suggestions about appropriate places to post a public-domain work like this, I'd love to hear them.  I want to put this screenplay out where lots of people can enjoy it.

This is the best place for that...


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Cool, thanks.  Glad to know I'm in the right place.     If anywhere else occurs to you, let me know.
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Specs (or final drafts for that matter) do not include musical selections or guitar riffs! That's for the director to decide. It needs to be reformatted.
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Thank you for your feedback!

I agree: musical selections don't belong in screenplays.  In this case, however, since I wrote the screenplay for fun and the movie will never be made, I took the liberty of spelling out the musical cues for the (admittedly slim) pleasure of the readers.

Regarding reformatting the script, were there any specific formatting tips you had in mind?  I'm eager to hear your opinion.
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