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Grandma Bear
Posted: November 1st, 2009, 7:23pm Report to Moderator
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well, I've read the beginning of this, but didn't bother posting anything since I didn't finish. I didn't finish because I was bored but rather because I have too many scripts already promised to read for friends.

I can say this though,I think usaking is borderline genius (haven't made up my mind yet). He's still young and fairly new at this, but I am very impressed with his creativity. Sure, it's not for everyone, but I still see genius in there. What you, usaking need to do is learn the craft of screenwriting, structure, character and so on. You do have something unique, you just need to learn to deliver it like a pro.

I think your logline here is one of the best ones I've ever read. Again, it's not for everyone, but I'm sure you already knew that.

Usaking, you would probably get more reads if you read other people's scripts...


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usaking
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me, thanks for the compliment of my logline.

I would never call myself a genius. When I hear the word genius, I think of Francis Ford Coppola and Orson Welles. I am nowhere near a genius, IMO. Although, if you honestly think I am, it is quite nice of you and I thank you very much for saying such a thing.

I know that I have to read other people's scripts in order for them to read mine. It's fair. I am really busy a lot so it is hard for me to have time to read scripts. I will try to read more scripts on here though.

By the way, you don't have to finish reading my script soon. Take your time reading other people's and read mine whenever you have the time. I don't mind.
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What was your first script called, and is it still on here?


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Quoted from Grandma Bear
I can say this though,I think usaking is borderline genius (haven't made up my mind yet). He's still young and fairly new at this, but I am very impressed with his creativity. Sure, it's not for everyone, but I still see genius in there.

Usaking, you would probably get more reads if you read other people's scripts...


Usaking, Me is damn good. Take careful note. If she says that you're on a winner lad.

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craig, my first script was called Frayson. It was posted on here about 2 months ago. I told Don to take it off the site the day it was posted due to the controversy around it. Most, if not all, people on this site hated it. I didn't want to take so much heat on such a thing and so I got rid of it from the site. You probably wouldn't have liked it anyway if it was still around.

rendevous, I am thankful to hear that me thinks to highly of my script. When I first submitted this script, I didn't think a lot of people would really care. I, myself, loved the script but had no idea that me and others would like it so much. It really is quite amazing and I am very thankful.
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