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Don
Posted: July 28th, 2009, 5:55pm Report to Moderator
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Emo: Loosely Based On Fictional Events by Patrick Breen (Mesisea) - Drama, Comedy - A bully, an emo, several dream sequences, and a lot of naughty language. 140 - doc, format


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Patrick,

I scanned your script and found your format needs help.

For scripts, nothing is ever bolded, bolded and italicized, especially character names and dialogue.

Also, if you could submit this in .PDF format, it may get more reads. Check out cutepdf.com for a good free converter add-on.

140 pages seems a bit long given the range of the recommended 100-120 pages.

From your logline, I assume this will be mostly about yourself and your ability to spew naughty words. Please rethink your logline to something a bit more  interesting.

It could be a great script, but the formatting especially the bolding/italics gets in the way of the read.

Gary

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