The Princess and the Harley by Rita Williams (vpowers) - Drama, Romance - The Princess and The Harley is a story about Monica, a high society novel writer.  She is married and has a daughter in college.  She finds herself in a mess when she was on her way to meet an interior decorator at her cabin in a remote area.  Her car breaks down and a series of misfortunes leaves her stranded.  Cash, riding by on his Harley, stops to help her.  After declining a couple of times, Cash promises to take her to the nearest exit to call for help.  She has no other choice. 104 pages - doc, format

yikes. got to page 2 and already felt like i was in an uphill battle trying to read this.
some suggestions, right off the bat:

1. save as a .pdf - you'll get more reads (at least you'll get more people to try).
2. omit camera angles from your action lines
3. don't need a colon after the character speaks
4. dialogue is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too on the nose. people don't talk like that.

on the upside, your logline is good. i was interested, anyway.

good luck with it.