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Posted: December 4th, 2014, 8:05pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Color of Justice by Bryan Ugochukwu - Drama, Crime, Gangster - An ex detective, with a haunting past, now working for the Russian mob must find the one responsible for killing the mob boss. 108 pages - pdf, format


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Thanks for the post


check out my scripts here....let me know what you think

https://www.dropbox.com/s/amkdn3svt5rernq/last%20hope.pdf?dl=0

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dead by dawn
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More Russians?  The logline isn't that good, either, Ugo.  Convince me to read this.  What makes Color of Justice different?  

(Note:  I did give the first 20 a fair shake)
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Ugo
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All right I'll work on it, thanks for the advice


check out my scripts here....let me know what you think

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Ugo
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I didn't know Russians were out of style


check out my scripts here....let me know what you think

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They just seem like they're in every action movie nowadays.  They were even the bad guys in The Equalizer, but I didn't care, because I thought that movie was awesome and it had a lot of other great stuff going for it.  A while back, I read a script on here called The Outsiders, and while it wasn't anything that blew my hair back, the fact that the writer took on The Yakuza - something I'm not familiar with - made it worth reading.  You don't really see many amateurs covering The Yakuza, it's always Italians and Russians.  It doesn't hurt to try something different.
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Makes senses, understood. Keep it in mind for the next one


check out my scripts here....let me know what you think

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