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Pete B. Lane
Posted: February 5th, 2010, 8:04pm Report to Moderator
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Nice easy read here...


Thanks for the read and the bump!

I haven't done anything with this script in well over a year. I do intend to do another draft some time in '10, but it's not a priority.


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Hope ya get some looks.


I always appreciate another pair of eyes.

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grademan
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Pete,

So this one got to the top of the influx pile so I read it.  Great idea, nicely executed.

Sure, the VO was questionable, the dialogue was formatted a little oddly in places and some descrption was a little longish in places but I could see (and hear) in my head what was happening in your script. That's what really worked for me.

Gary
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Thanks for the read, Gary.
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