Steve

I can see how this would piss off other applicants by not taking the challenge seriously but as someone who didn't enter, I enjoyed it.

Funny how you capitalised all the props, name dropping each one just for the sake of it.

The dialogue was funny, quite witty in places but in terms of story and characters…well even Jake admits it was going nowhere.

The minge scene gave me a few grins, having it off scene was key and great how you paid it off later by mentioning it at the end.

So, yeah as an OWC outsider, I dug this, made me smile a couple of times. Sure its not what the challenge called for but what the hell, it was an entertaining read.

Good stuff, Steve.

Col.

Hi Col(and Brian M- sorry, I just realised I hadn't responded to your post).

Glad you liked it. Yeah, it was my way of ranting against the theme! i made sure to put all the props in the order of Michael's list, and in CAPS just to be an arsehole.

I've just done the re-write for when Michael produces it - its basically the same except Darcy is shown as the guy trying to do the challenge script and all this stuff starts happening for real. I better not say too much at this stage!!

The Villa won this morning at Wigan, leaving us 3 points behind Spurs with a game in hand. Go the lads!!

Stevie

Just seen that this was picked as one of the winners, nice work, man.  Sometimes it pays to screw convention. I look forwrad to seeing it.

Ya, Villa had a good win, my money is still on Man City or Liverpool to take 4th though. Once again, Milner is proving his worth, interesting to see how much he'll feature come the World Cup.

it felt like you were just trying to have fun, and show your wits. if thats ur thing, by all means, go 4 it.