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Issues going to get accepted. I have a gut feeling about it.
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Congrats, Rick! Nice job. I guess I'll have to read his all the way through, as I gave up after 3 pages and gave it the lowest 5 X's, originally, based on the writing, mistakes, heavy VO, etc.
I'll re-post my updated comments.
Wow, only 2 to go...pressure is on!!!!!!!!
EDIT
Looking back at this one, I'm shocked it was selected, as it was the only script that ran past the 12 page max. How can that be acceptable? I guess the page limit is no longer an issue, huh? I know there were numerous scripts that had to be cut back to make the page max, and mine was a prime example. Can't say I'm pleased about this (no offense to Rick).
The more I think about this, the more upset I am. Not just in this OWC, but pretty much every one. 12 pages can be tough. It is difficult to cut things out, when you know you have to, especially when there is a time constraint. This entry didn't do that. It wasn't edited at all. It was poorly written, for the most part, and as many said, it was either a tough chug to get through, or downright impossible.
IMO, when a script doesn't meet the challenge, right off the bat, it's out, whether or not there is something lying underneath that calls out. Guess that's not how it actually is.
There would hardly be any scripts left in the competition if we were to take the rules to the very literal letter of the law, with the limitations that were set.
The script can easily be cut down to whatever time MC wants it...
I slammed scripts for not sticking to the page requirement. At least one was too long and one was too short. Some had animals and kids in them even though it clearly stated not to use either.
I'm happy for Rick he was picked, but I'm with Jeff here about the page length. Any other comp, you'd be out by default.
My thoughts are that the average for all the scripts selected is within the page limit.
When you're looking at these things from a production standpoint the rules become guidelines and you pick what you like and you can work with. If a script happens to be above the page limit and you think it will survive some cuts then you pick that one. If a script happens to have a child in it and you think it can survive if the child is made a near adult then you pick that one. In this case, The Faceless was chosen by two other judges besides me. I happen to like it and I want to do it for the series and in the end, when deciding on productions, that's all that really matters no matter who's producing it.
I'm happy for Rick as well, but it doesn't change my mind or opinion on the rules of all the OWC's.
It's really quite simple, when it comes to a page limit. Taking into consideration whatever the challenge actually is, is a different beast altogether. This was a tough and confusing challenge to most, based on something most of us are unfamiliar with. As far as I'm concerned, what "props" were acceptable were not clearly defined. Same goes for what was possible and impossible in MovieStorm.
Rick, I'm not against you, personally, in any way. I think you're a good guy, and this rant is not aimed at you at all. Hope you understand that.
EDIT after Cornie's post...
So, page limit is no longer something we should be concerned with in an OWC? That is actually great news for me. I'll keep that in mind.
There have been plenty of OWCs where people submitted scripts that passed the page limit and resulted in numerous people commenting "You passed the page limit, you passed the page limit!". If this were a contest, which it isn't, you would probably be disqualified. But as I just stated, this isn't a contest, it's a writing exercise.