Chris, well played with the clone-number. It made everything a little bit more paranoiac.
I see here a good script, although it's not really scary, but as you said: What is scary?

For sure; Victor must have a hell of a fear, but the cross-cutting between the patron made the movie more "Zombieland-scary" as "The exorcist-scary". But I liked it anyway and your did a good job on this one.

The only thing that irritates me was the sudden insert of crew members - Where have they been, while the conversation between Victor and Chuck? - BUT WHO CARES! It gaves the story this "Where the hell are these F****** coming from?!"-Moment. Love it.

All in all: Good work!

Cheers,

Pedro