Oh yeah, LOL!  

Hey make sure you have a scene where one of them holds his gun all "gangSTAR" like, you know all cocked to the side like a little bitch and Just have Jason maul the mother plucker!

I simply hate that.  It makes me ill and nautious to see that shit... like in Dawn remake, when that no talent whatever the hell his name is Shukwanda Phifer or whatever it is, draws his gun and cocks it all to the side... like he's a "gangSTAR" or some shit... Whatever!  This is an end of the world situation, these are ZOMBIES and thousands of them... you wouldn't be looking for style points asshole!

That was an unrealistic moment in the film for me, maybe even more than the ZOMBIES themselves... Do I dare to let my mind wonder?

B.A.L.T.I.S. ~~ >>

In that case I'll wait for the re-write!

Re-write should be finished soon.
I've added one scene to up the murder spree a little, and I intend to change the ending.
That is all I'm going to do at the moment, I'm busy on another project called "Season Of The Devil".

Thanks for the interest in reading though, I hope you enjoy when you do read it.

I have just sent in the 2nd draft, which is highly likely to be the final draft.
I have added a scene involving the gangsta rappers (which has probably doubled the swear count in that one scene alone) and slightly altered the ending.

Hope you enjoy, let me know what you think.

Cheers

Well it sounds pretty cool. Gangsta rappers? Sounds pretty crazy. But as long as your changing the ending then things should seem better.

Cheers, Chism

i loved it more then anything. but use a character from the other movies that wasn't in all of them.  

Cheers, glad you liked it.

I really doubt i'm going to do another draft of this, to be honest this was my first script and I wanted to see if my format of writing was suitable.

Im so pleased some people enjoyed it, and im really happy people have posted their views. Bad or good, it is great just to know where you are going wrong and whatnot.

The 2nd daft, when it's up, really only has a couple of extra scenes, and a slighty different ending... but not that different.

The rap scene is just a scene to up the murder count and have a laugh basically, if I get someone calling me rascist for the language used then that is laughable, but i'm half expecting it.

Thanks for posting Don.

The new draft is now up.

Whats you're views on the added scene? Please let me know as I'm unsure whether to keep it in or remove it.

Cheers

this script sounds good but you cant change the camp name because it isnt the same

Well, being my script, I can change the name of the camp if I choose to and I did.
It's not the first time, it was also changed in Part 6.

So very true indeed... So true, in fact, it should be spelt TRU~

It's hist screenplay... let him do, alter, add, subtract, multiply and divid how and what he wants to out of the franchise.  As far as fan fiction goes, that I've read, this is one of the only ones that tried to do something different or add an element to it.

There is a Batman screenplay here too, that is brilliant and of course as per usual when I talk about fan fic screenplays... My baby K.K. wrote Goonies Never Say Die, which is fantastic!

Scoob, keep up the good work...

Balt~

This is DEFINITLY the final draft of this so enjoy if you like the ol' Jason flicks and if you dont, take a read and be pleasantly surprised!

Yo, scoob. I read your script. It was better than mine by far. I wrote The Basement. Anyway, i hate the jason movies because they have way to mu ch gore and nudity. Plus they scare me the most. I do not know why, but they do. I decided to read this because:
1) From what i read on the post of my script, you seem to know a lot about writing scripts.

2) I thought i could learn from your writting and I did.

Thanks to this script i learned a lot. You are one of the biggest influences in my life at the moment.

P.S. If anybody here has any good ideas i can have for a good script please email me......anime_freak98284@hotmail.com