My biggest problem with this script is that I couldn't tell who or what the big evil was or why the hospital is cursed.  The evil is supernatural in origin, but that's about it.  I can only guess thtat the boy died in the hospital and plays an important role.


Phil

This script was SCARY. I couldn't even go to sleep at night after reading the script. All of the details were described perfectly and when you read on, you see the peices of the story getting put together as you read along.

The thing that is the "biggest" positive is all the characters. They are individually unique and they do portray real people. There is a lot of tension between the character at some moments, and that was interesting. I was amazed that Amy was the main character. I thought'd it be Charlie or Frankie, but it was the girl who cheated on her boyfriend that was the main character. But as the story goes along, you see how the characters really feel. I could tell Amy was as innocent as all good girls are as she kept on crying and crying and saying "Sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you."

Creepy ending, that's what kept me up all night.

I hope this is helpful.

E.T.