Phil,
I've used Bert's advise, gone over it again, and changed some things. In doing so I found more places about the POVs that needed fixed, too. I've been working on it. No matter how done you think you are, there's almost more to do.

Cindy: I took another look at your script, and used word wrap to get the pages into one frame. I see THIS all down the left border:  /par. The quotation marks are replaced by other stuff added. The top of the script has alot of gobbledy gook before you get to the  part that's readable. Very distracting.

I have a 2002 Windows XP with Internet Explorer, and AOL is my ISP. I haven't seen this happen on anyone else's script I've viewed in Word Pad.

I uploaded my script  in pdf format,  and the upload left some empty spaces that weren't there originally. Irritating!

It's good if some people aren't seeing what's appearing to me. Just thought you'd want to know. It looks like a good story that deserves the best presentation.  

Odd, It looks fine to me.  I'm looking at it in MS Word (I tried WordPad, too) and there is nothing amiss with the formating.

Great script, btw.

Dab

Hey Monette,
Computers can be goofy sometimes. I know I've gone to read a couple different scripts and when I opened them up nothing was there except a blank page, and other members have been able to read them with no problem.
Who knows?

Dab, glad you liked it.

Cindy

-Cindy-

      I'm reading this now and I'm somewhat pleased. I thought for some reason this would turn up like that Brit film "Long Time Dead" or something film like that, it isn't. But, if you are and were to revise this again my only suggestion is too work on the dialogue, much of it seems forced, but everything else I'm liking at the moment! Love ya.

         -Chelsea-

Thanks for reading it Chelsea. I've been trying to do another rewrite, fixing things before this Wednesday when I have a meeting with a producer. I've met with this person before, a few times. She usually says, "It's coming along". LOL
So, who knows. She has helped me out quite a bit with it though.