Thanks for the reads Caroline and Slabasta

Quoted from slabstaa 138 pages?  That's a long haul

It's a longer script, but I did cut it down from over 220 pages.

Quoted from slabstaa The opening scene ain't bad.  Risks should be taken, but I do remember hearing somewhere anyone under 16 can't be shown with an on screen kill.  I forget exactly what it was but it went something like that.

Nope, you can have on screen kills of anyone of any age, loads of films have them.

Quoted from slabstaa Hannah comes up to Casey and asks "did you hear about Beck and Andrew?"  You mean Katie and Andrew, right?

My bad, I changed the names, guess I missed that one, thanks for catching it.

Thanks again for the read and comments

Agreed!  Kill anyone, any age.  As far as I'm concerned, it shows you have the balls to say, "This ain't gonna be like everything else out there".

Stick to your guns, bud!