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Basement Decorum by M L Kennedy - Horror, Comedy - Their blind date wasn't going very well, then the apocalypse happened. 90 pages - pdf format

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I donít know. I scanned through the first 40 or so pages and it doesnít look like thereís too much dialogue at all. Actually looks like the perfect amount. I would recommended a title page though. You seem to have left that out.

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Read the first 20 or so pages. I really like this. Great set up. Good characters and funny back and forth dialogue. Pretty impressed. I'm gonna finish it because now I'm interested.


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