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Posted: July 18th, 2022, 1:13pm Report to Moderator
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Glow in the Dark by Luke Anthony Walker - Horror - A small group of eco-activists and nature-lovers, go camping in the woods together on All-Hallows Eve, hoping to discover a rare and endangered species of moth - but when an eerie fog rolls in,  and the fiddler plays his haunting music, they quickly come to realize it's not just the planet that needs saving - it's themselves. 108 pages

Contest: Kosice International Film Festival - Winner Best Horror Screenplay 2022 - pdf format

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This is a nice story. I can see why it won a contest. It seemed a bit long and slow in the beginning but that’s just my unprofessional opinion. Once it got dark and scary, the excitement was enjoyable. I didn’t intend to finish reading it last night but once I got hooked, I couldn’t put it down.

I couldn’t find anything to help you with. It was well written with a nice twist at the end.

The only thing helpful advice I could think of is that you left out the obligatory FADE IN in the beginning and at the bottom of page 11, you have a typo: you wrote your instead of you’re in Alex’s dialog.

Mostly I wanted you to know that I read this and liked it.




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D.A., I hate to break it to you but the obligatory FADE IN is no longer. Actually there's been a decided shift away from it.

I still use it cause I firmly believe it's a part of the magic, except in OWCs of course where every line is precious.  


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