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Tyler King
Posted: August 4th, 2017, 8:28pm Report to Moderator
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Congrats to the winner and the runner ups.
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Michael
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Congrats to the winner
Congrats to all who entered
Congrats to Jeff and Pia and Don
Congrats to me for getting such rave reviews as .... " This shit stinks" -- "Writer you suck"  and my favorite, "Your writing is as painful as full blown hemorrhoids"

This was fun...

Luck to ALL...
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Tyler King
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Quoted from Michael
Congrats to the winner
Congrats to all who entered
Congrats to Jeff and Pia and Don
Congrats to me for getting such rave reviews as .... " This shit stinks" -- "Writer you suck"  and my favorite, "Your writing is as painful as full blown hemorrhoids"

This was fun...

Luck to ALL...


LMAO. That literally made me crack up... but in all honesty, I actually remember reading your script and liking it. Don't think I commented on it though, was going to and ended up spacing.
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Michael
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Really??? You liked it??? Damn Tyler your the only one... You must be sick like me...lol
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Michael
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Damn Tyler that makes two of us. Damn man
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Tyler King
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I mean, it had its issues, that's for sure, but I think it really stood out to me because it was just way out there, much different than all the other entries. Even though it didn't meet the criteria for the OWC, I had fun reading it...mainly because you didn't take it too seriously and as a reader, neither did I. I think everyone else did, though, which was the problem for them. But I knew and read it for what it was, and enjoyed it. I can't even begin to tell you how hard you had me rolling with your descriptions lmao

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Michael
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Awesome Tyler, It was meant to be a dark comedy.  It was rushed though. I had like 6 hours ugh
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Awesome Tyler, It was meant to be a dark comedy.  It was rushed though. I had like 6 hours ugh


Well I laughed hard, that's for damn sure, so well done. And for 6 hours, that's pretty damn good I think.
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Congratulations to Rene and all who entered. I'm sorry I didn't get chance to enter (my own fault) and I'm also sorry I didn't get to read/review all the scripts. I hope my notes were useful to those that I did.


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Sandra Elstree.
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Congratulations, Rene!

Yours was one of my favourites. Well done and memorable!

And Michael, of Don't Talk to Strangers fame:

When I started reading yours I was really getting a kick out of it, but then it fell off for me:

The only reason was it went too out there with Mother Wrench

It felt sad to me actually to stop reading because I really felt a good and funny writing style that was hitting good notes with me. So, in the future, if I were to give any advice, I'd say don't go that far. I'm definitely interested in what you come up with in the future.

Good for everyone who entered. Some very good writing on display.

Thanks to everyone!

Sandra



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Damn...I didn't even realize this was up already.  Cool!

Congrats to Rene - I'm pretty sure this was indeed the best and I'm glad the voters got it right.

Looks like a bunch of my guesses on who wrote what were correct, but I'm impressed those I called out didn't give it away.

I was almost sure Dustin wrote that Deathly Shade script, but he stuck to his guns about not entering.

Once Khamanna suggested Sandra wrote White Icing, I knew she was spot on.

And, I was almost 100% sure Dan wrote Daughter of Gore, but he too didn't reveal anything to make it obvious - and Dan, IMO, this is by far your best work here. Sure, it needs some help, but in places, it's well done.

Good job, everyone and glad most seemed to enjoy this challenge.



Jeff,
     Thanks a lot for those kind words.  That was really nice of you.  Sorry it took so long to reply.  I've started going to a PT clinic that specializes in spinal cord and it is messing me up.  Pain has been up, but, I do have a tiny bit more of mobility...

I knew there were issues with my entry.  I was also not happy that you guessed my entry on the first guess.  I try to pride myself on writing in different genres and being hard to pick out.  

It's odd, but, again, I didn't get to tell the story that I wanted to.  The 4 person limit really hurt me.  And the other story idea that I had, a guy who gets kidnapped, I didn't think qualified as a fish out of water, so, I scrapped that one too.

I will write more for my entry there.  

Thanks again for the kind words,  congrats to Rene, the runner-ups, and everyone else who entered.

Dan


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I'm interested in reading animation, horror, sci fy, suspense, fantasy, and anything that is good.  I enjoy writing the same.  Looking to team with anyone!

Thanks
Dan
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