Nice work ripping off the crying game.
I expect an immaculate piece of work before being carelessly published on a ameutur screenwriting forum.
Typo after typo after bleeding typo. Have you no diginity?
Everything was bland and predictable. Two men want some cock while pretending they don't know he's a tranny.

Charming man

Quoted from Charming Man Nice work ripping off the crying game. I expect an immaculate piece of work before being carelessly published on a ameutur screenwriting forum. Typo after typo after bleeding typo. Have you no diginity? Everything was bland and predictable. Two men want some cock while pretending they don't know he's a tranny. Charming man

Hey Charling man!

Thanks for taking a look at this mes...I mean script lol

To be honest I've never seen The Crying Game, but I do remember it was a big deal when it came out. I also remember its supposed to be about a guy who falls for someone he thinks is a girl, but whos really a guy or something along those lines.

Although I wasnt thinking of that specific movie while writing this I guess I was going for that kind of theme. Oddly I took out the planned "end reveal"  as I didn't think it fit the rules of the challange, but I guess the "theme" still comes through.

I wrote this with a lot of Haste and it shows. Sorry about any typos.

Again thanks for taking the time to read this and I'm sorry it wasnt to your liking.