Ritchie gets up from the chair, hurries to the door. INT. SIXTH FLOOR HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS NASTY KID (19), waves a gun, pushes by, races down the stairs. Near the piano, Jo-Jo slides to the floor. Ritchie, coughing, runs toward her, shouts into his phone
It takes an awfully sedentary sort of person to think of that as "action", but I guess I am because I was rooting for Ritchie from that point on. Funny, too. |