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Helio
Posted: January 17th, 2006, 7:28am Report to Moderator
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Hey, take a look at this site and watch this one minute filme that participated of a 11º One Minute Festival. The title is KAFKA MORA AO LADO (Kafka is my neighbour):

http://tvuol.uol.com.br/cinema/festivaldominuto/2004/12/07/ult2663u17.jhtm

PS Don't forget to read my next short script  Hello, Mr. Einstein. Soon in Short Session!

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It looked good.  I really liked the style of the piece, especially with the moving panels.

I can't really say much about plot because...well...I really don't know what the heck was going on.


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Posted: January 20th, 2006, 6:10am Report to Moderator
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It started like when we do a type of advertise brainstorm.

We decided to create an unrealistic and absurd plot where two neighbors are taken surprised when they are seen themselves with the face of the other and at the final neither of them are they indeed.
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Hey, that was alright, Helio.  Not sure what it means, exactly, but then you yourself refer to it as an "absurd" piece.  So I'll just take it for what it is.

It "feels" like there is more going on though, as the production is quite stylish, and frankly, it looks great.

My favorite part was the music, though, especially that little "hoo-hoo" when she first looks into the mirror.

Nice work


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Thanks Bert and other thank on behalf of my friend Lallo Bochinno that directed the film and also for the little HOO-HOO!
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Helio,

I've been trying to watch this, but for some reason it won't play.

I'll keep trying.


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Hi Mike
try this:

http://festivaldominuto.uol.com.br/diretores.php?cod_diretor=28

Go to : Diretores (as)

click in

Lallo Valverde Bocchino

Will open on the left...

Kafka Mora ao Lado
Lallo Valverde Bocchino
Iajai/BR 2004

...and click on black square.
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Yep, that worked.

Not bad at all, I too liked the use of the panels, and I think by doing that you were able to fit in a little bit more, but I must say....that one guy's hair is hilarious.  It's just this huge afro.


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Yes, it is very huge indeed. Here between us, Mike, I think he hides things inside his afro...
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