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Helio
Posted: January 17th, 2006, 7:28am
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Jonathan Terry
Posted: January 19th, 2006, 7:21pm
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It looked good. I really liked the style of the piece, especially with the moving panels. I can't really say much about plot because...well...I really don't know what the heck was going on.
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Helio
Posted: January 20th, 2006, 6:10am
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It started like when we do a type of advertise brainstorm. We decided to create an unrealistic and absurd plot where two neighbors are taken surprised when they are seen themselves with the face of the other and at the final neither of them are they indeed.
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bert
Posted: January 20th, 2006, 7:38am
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Hey, that was alright, Helio. Not sure what it means, exactly, but then you yourself refer to it as an "absurd" piece. So I'll just take it for what it is.
It "feels" like there is more going on though, as the production is quite stylish, and frankly, it looks great.
My favorite part was the music, though, especially that little "hoo-hoo" when she first looks into the mirror.
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Helio
Posted: January 20th, 2006, 9:25am
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Thanks Bert and other thank on behalf of my friend Lallo Bochinno that directed the film and also for the little HOO-HOO!
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Shelton
Posted: January 20th, 2006, 4:44pm
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Helio, I've been trying to watch this, but for some reason it won't play. I'll keep trying.
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Helio
Posted: January 20th, 2006, 5:20pm
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Shelton
Posted: January 20th, 2006, 5:49pm
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Yep, that worked. Not bad at all, I too liked the use of the panels, and I think by doing that you were able to fit in a little bit more, but I must say....that one guy's hair is hilarious. It's just this huge afro.
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Helio
Posted: January 20th, 2006, 7:43pm
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Yes, it is very huge indeed. Here between us, Mike, I think he hides things inside his afro...
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