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bert
Posted: August 1st, 2006, 6:58am Report to Moderator
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Well, this is certainly worthy of a bump for those who might have missed it.  This was great, George.

Did everyone notice how George (ever the "artiste") tried to give his three guys individual personalities?  There is the hard-rocking yellow guy, the laid-back, finger-snappin' black guy, and of course, the dreamy frontman.

If forced to criticize, I might suggest that you find yourself a cinematographer.  I realize we are working with a limited budget here, but tacking up a few sheets would have made a big difference, I think.

Very, very amusing, though.  And it is just -- interesting -- to see you like that.


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George Willson
Posted: August 1st, 2006, 11:39am Report to Moderator
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Did everyone notice how George (ever the "artiste") tried to give his three guys individual personalities?  There is the hard-rocking yellow guy, the laid-back, finger-snappin' black guy, and of course, the dreamy frontman.

If forced to criticize, I might suggest that you find yourself a cinematographer.  I realize we are working with a limited budget here, but tacking up a few sheets would have made a big difference, I think.


Thank Bert (and everyone else). I was wondering if anyone noticed the personality thing. It was as spur of the moment as everything else. And I'm sure anything would have made a better background than my computer desk (where I now sit), but again, my excuse is "spur of the moment." I had some time on my hands and opted to use it like so. So it's not necessarily limited budget as no budget at all.

I have another "multi-me" idea that I might put some more work into (and actually has a storyline and a script that no one on here has read), but that'll happen when I get some more free time on my hands since it will take alot longer.


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Posted: August 1st, 2006, 12:17pm Report to Moderator
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WOW! Hey, may you three can play next Smoke gets in your eyes for me?

Definitly, between the three the best one was the guy in black t-shit!

Congrats GW!

By the way my sixteen dear daugther did something also on WMM, however infinitly inferior to yours George.
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