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I'm an American writer but am a refugee from a European fiction writer's group that was disbanded by the site hosting it.
I have about ten feature length scripts currently in progress that could be considered 'high concept' and am very willing to critique other people's work. I just finished a coming of age piece called 'Crocodile Tears' and am working on a unique take on the zombie genre with "Easter Summer."
I will warn you that if you have a weak or fragile ego do not request a critique from me. I am extremely brutal but very dedicated to the craft, meaning = I will help you pound the scabby flesh from your script, siphon away the dross, and end up with a crafted story.
I am serious about getting better with my own work and appreciate all constructive criticism.
I have about ten feature length scripts currently in progress that could be considered 'high concept' and am very willing to critique other people's work.
Your working on ten featureas all at once!?! Don't overwhelm yourself! Anyways, welcome to the community! The more you read, the more your stuff will get read!
I will warn you that if you have a weak or fragile ego do not request a critique from me. I am extremely brutal but very dedicated to the craft, meaning = I will help you pound the scabby flesh from your script, siphon away the dross, and end up with a crafted story.
There's a couple of people here like that. Be warned.
The general rule is, if you're going to provide negative feedback, provide examples for it to back your statement.
I only give what I want to receive. Which is concise criticism aimed at refining and developing the story. If someone does not want to improve their craft I will not critique their work. Trust me, I understand the fragile egos most of us 'artist types' have.
I can't believe how active and friendly the members here are though. I am very happy that I decided to join this site.
Okay, Electric, show to them how "bad" you are, dude, reviewing my KOWABUNGA! posted in SHORTS. I'll suport that jump... Will I?!
Uh, I cannot find the script. I even looked through all your scripts. I'd definitely critique it for you though. I can't promise it would be 'bad' but I promise you'll at least cry yourself to sleep tonight.