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Steve, just wanted to say hi and also congrats. Looking at the date of the post bubs would be roughly 2mths now, as for sleep dep - wait till you have 4 - then it really kills you. Anyways, I am fairly new to this too, just posted my first script and am willing to help with input for you and anyone who needs it. Although, with me being new to this, I sometimes wonder if the info I'm giving is right. Do you sometimes feel like that?
Good luck with your writing and with bubs - hope he/she is sleeping soundly for you.
Renee.
(Plus - will try to review your work tomoz - just can't guarantee it straight away in this hectic houshold)
Well, firstly thanks for the congrats which is very gracious of you and commiserations’ on your own hectic household. Bub is actually 7 weeks old, was two weeks overdue but you'll pretty close to the mark.
I've seen your script up (The League Undisclosed) and after your nice comments here and also feedback on my own "not the best" OWC you've earned yourself a read me thinks.
I sometimes wonder if the info I'm giving is right. Do you sometimes feel like that?
At first it can be apprehensive but at the end of the day all you’re doing is giving your opinion and we all have one of those. Just give your honest views and try not to hold back on your comments, people can take it...well most can. We’re all here to help each other at the end of the day and improve.
Am I correct in thinking you’re here in Oz? Just pm if you ever need a read of anything, I’m not that experienced but will always give you a honest opinion.
All the best and thanks again for congrats, Renee. It’s much appreciated
Ahh, some quiet time without - I'm on the computer! I'ts my turn! Lol, I love my kids, but they are definitely a handful. Yes, I live in the land of Oz, but over the other side - Melbourne. Thanks for the offer to pm you, you are quite welcome to do the same. I've done a lot of research on formatting, but still get mixed up in what's right and wrong at times. I'd love you tell me what you think of The League Undisclosed - being my first script I'm eager to know whether it passes or fails the public opinion. Am going to read 'The Chat Up Line' now, but I see you've had lots of comments on it already, did you still want me to make any comments?
Am going to read 'The Chat Up Line' now, but I see you've had lots of comments on it already, did you still want me to make any comments?
Totally up to you but like you correctly say, it already has its fair share of feedback. It was my first script and some of comments I received were so helpful as to what I was doing wrong.
Nice to finally get some background on people I've been interacting with for the past few months. Reciprocating the welcome even though we both discovered this place around the same time. =D
'Artist' is not a term you should use to refer to yourself. Let others, and your work, do it for you.
Nice to finally get some background on people I've been interacting with for the past few months. Reciprocating the welcome even though we both discovered this place around the same time. =D
Thanks, Felipe. Good on you buddy. You're right, we did join SS around the same time...actually didn't know that.
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