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Great story. Loved the spinning intro, but thought it just a tiny bit too long....I was getting dizzy (perhaps your intent?).
The intro is a looooong story. At least one other person mentioned it making them dizzy. It wasn't intentional, but I'll be more aware of things like that with title sequences in the future.
I thought it was good and it is nice to see others see it that way too! Good to reaffirm I have good taste! Congrats on continuing success... keep it going!
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The original audio was problematic because the mics were closer on tighter shots and farther away on wider ones. Sometimes the audio was good and other times not so much.
Ambient noises were another issue. A refrigeration unit ruined all the audio at the bistro. At the police station, we also ran into problems with a refrigeration unit at a grocery store next door. I convinced the manager to shut it off during shooting. Also, traffic noise became an issue.
In the end, I felt the audio wasn't good enough and decided to ADR the entire film.
I'm going to great lengths to correct all the issues with my next film.
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