This was ok, nice concept but a bit hit and miss.  The opening is good enough but the story telling could be stronger.  Also if a story can be too scary for a youngster surely a story about copulating is worse yet no one thought it was inappropriate.  I did like the America's next top pumpkin, that was funny but the stereotyping of the angry black woman/pumpkin was...a bit too streotypical lol.  Not a bad effort.

A decent enough idea, but just like April's initial story gets waylayed by the others, so does the script, even though this is what kids would do.  The kids seem to have distinct personalities at first, but Dwayne, Chris and Josh kind of blend in the end since they all take over the story.  The Top Pumpkin bit was nice, though, but could have been taken even further, considering how OTT "Top Model" can be on its own.

Thanks everyone for the reads and comments. I was so-so at how this would turn out, considering my love for comedy(ehhh)

I worked it out at the last minute and am proud of what i put out. A lot of people commented at how things got crazy and haywired as the story progressed, and its true. The only thing i can say is that i wasn't sure of myself, and i think i wanted to show it in my characters. They weren't sure what they wanted to tell either, all of their story's weren't supposed to be one big cohesive statement with one initial theme. Each person had their own different P.O.V and it showed. Topping it off with Josh's inability to tell stories.

I'm glad i participated though, accomplished something i thought i wouldn't.