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JEStaats
Posted: October 31st, 2020, 5:21pm Report to Moderator
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Curious, though, and maybe I should read it again, but couldn't he change the loop since he returns back to when he was buying the booze? Wasn't it all a premonition? If it was, what a turd to buy it and have a drink.
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Curious, though, and maybe I should read it again, but couldn't he change the loop since he returns back to when he was buying the booze? Wasn't it all a premonition? If it was, what a turd to buy it and have a drink.


They are supposed to be in some kind of purgatory, reliving the last moments because Casper can't let it go because of guilt - so he keeps replaying and replaying. He loses memory of each reply as soon as he starts a new one (kind of like repressed memories I guess)

The other two remember each replay, because they have come to terms with it and are waiting to pass on to the other side, but don't want to leave their friend.

So they can't change the past at all. Was hard to get all that across in 6 pages though lol and I had no chance to rewrite at all


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I think stretching this out by a few more pages will help a lot. Hopefully, you give it a rewrite, I'll definitely check it out. I love time loop scripts like this.

-- Michael


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