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Echoing what has been said here, I think you bit off more than you could chew in so few pages. The visuals are there, but the story is lacking and there's too much left unexplained. Outside of the challenge, this could have life as an animation or a longer comic with more put into it.

Nice effort, congrats on getting something submitted.


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