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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    One Week Challenge    February 2015 One Week Challenge  ›  The February 2015 OWC Scripts Moderators: Mr. Blonde
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Reef Dreamer
Posted: February 17th, 2015, 2:29pm Report to Moderator
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I didn't enjoy any of the scripts in this OWC, to be perfectly honest.

The quality of the writing was almost universally high, but none of the scripts worked for me. It would be a Pass on all.

I've felt like an absolute Grinch during this OWC. Almost every review has been the same. There's only one script I came across that worked at all...and that's only because it stuck religiously to the original urban legend.

In choosing my topic, I'd already read all the legends. Reading them again,  just extended and often weakened, wasn't much fun. The challenge was a good one, but it essentially encouraged everyone to merely plagiarise already existing tales.  All the decent stuff came from the quality of the legends. All the additions failed, imho.


Whilst I agree you have been miserable   I actually I do agree in part. Having read some of the Urban Legands, when one popped up that was close to the original I felt under whelmed. Know it already etc which is a tad unfair.

But then again we're meant to be writing something new, a new angle, new twist, so something close to the original would be considered less than a new take.


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
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khamanna
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I'm on a contrary thinking it's one of the strongest OWC's. I read only 9 I think. So far 2 recommends, maybe more, but two for sure and like 5 considers.

I think all 9 should be rewrote, more or less but still very strong work.

I don't even want to read any further - you guys put me to shame with your work.
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Reef Dreamer
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You know what, I sometimes think I know who the writers are...not this time. I haven't a clue on any of them.

A few to go though.


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
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Dreamscale
Posted: February 18th, 2015, 4:53pm Report to Moderator
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...and I've been a grinch as well.

I agree with Rick that the quality this OWC is very low...in terms of writing and story.

I've got about 5 more to go.  I actually really liked one.  I thought one was decent to pretty good.  And another two were borderline OK.  The rest?  Very poor, IMO.

I know I've pissed some peeps off, and I apologize, as I always do.  If there's nothing to be taekn from my feedback, please, disregard completely.
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AnthonyCawood
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All reviewed and a pretty mixed bag as you'd expect, now I can go write something!


Anthony Cawood - Award winning screenwriter
Available Short screenplays - http://www.anthonycawood.co.uk/short-scripts
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IMDB Link - http://www.imdb.com/name/nm6495672/?ref_=fn_al_nm_1
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Quoted from Dreamscale

If there's nothing to be taken from my feedback, please, disregard completely.


No problemo


"I know you want to work for Mo Fuzz. And Mo Fuzz wants you to. But first, I'm going to need to you do something for me... on spec." - Mo Fuzz, Tapeheads, 1988
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Stumpzian
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I'm puzzled that so many have TWO names. One on the title page, a different one with the logline.

Interesting Google results. Thanks, marnieml.



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LC
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Quoted from Stumpzian
I'm puzzled that so many have TWO names. One on the title page, a different one with the logline. ...

Often was the case if you came up with your own moniker Don would leave it at that.

Perhaps he decided this time around - nope you're getting the name I give you.





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stevie
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Change of heart was Christian Barnard who was a heart transplant doctor



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Don
Posted: February 19th, 2015, 4:23pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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I feel like Don is trying to tell us something with these names. Someone please crack the code!!



I'd like to take credit, but it was not me who came up with the names.

Don


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Ryan1
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I didn't research them all, but quite a few I recognized as characters from TV shows:

Alex Krycek - The X Files
Grace Beaumont - Revolution
Robert Quarles- Justified
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Dreamscale
Posted: February 19th, 2015, 7:39pm Report to Moderator
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Mr. Blonde strikes again...
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Who is Allen McQuerin III?


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Mr. Blonde
Posted: February 19th, 2015, 8:45pm Report to Moderator
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What good are choices if they're all bad?

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Guys, there are three I didn't come up with. If you want, you guys can figure out all the rest. The first one to get them all wins a Sutter Cane lunchbox. Lol. =)


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I know a secret about Commodore Perry Ladeu....


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