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mcornetto
Posted: August 18th, 2009, 3:11am Report to Moderator
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Defects lie, all of iced fleets
to select Ed if the edicts flee,    
those feces tiled in sliced feet,
disorganized from self-deceit.
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Tommyp
Posted: August 18th, 2009, 6:25am Report to Moderator
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Self deceit,
Slippery meat,
Whacking off,
Dirty sock.

Rely on the hand,
Dire as contraband,
Real girls won’t get you off,
So you have a quick toss.

Truth is it’s bad,
Better be a passing fad
Bringing yourself to orgasm
Is like falling into a deep chasm

Be a real man,
Bulk up, get yourself a tan,
Because masturbation is self deceit,
Woo a girl, let her give you a real treat.



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rendevous
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Surely 'woo', no?

I dunno Tommy. Shagging's alright, but you can't beat the real thing.  


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Tommyp
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Haha fair enough RV.

"woo"? I'm confused.

EDIT: OH! "woe" should be "woo". OOPS!

Thanks, brother.


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mcornetto
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I very curious if anyone really "got" my last poem.  How about if today's theme is something more gothic, like  ghosts?
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Quoted from mcornetto
I very curious if anyone really "got" my last poem.  How about if today's theme is something more gothic, like  ghosts?


I didn't realise there was a theme a day, I just wrote a crazy poem yesterday.  I'll keep that in mind.


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CindyLKeller
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HAUNTED
by Cindy L. Keller

Shadows sway betwixt silvery veils
stretching vapors of opaque light.
Still oak trees hold no tales.
Secrets are hushed by night.

Marshy green of nethermost glade...
Spirits maundering cries...
Echoes reach out to darkness... Fade.
Footprints settle from sight.

Fathom you must - secluded endeavor.
Serpents guard. Curiosity laid.
Be prepared to stay forever
when entering nethermost glade.

Hear the howl of the banshee's wail.
Trembling leaves of green subside,
giving way to spirit's sail...
The summoning forces ride.


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I'll go with Cindy's lead. Here's the start of something I'm working on.

The ghosts of my mind blow wild
Always there, ever since I was a boy
Sometimes silent, but never absent
In the darker times they move free
Enslaving me


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Great poem Cindy!

I'm in two minds
Time's lost in the night
Whispers, creeps and crawls
The furniture shakes off the walls

A message from the other side
A story in a bottle caught in the tide
White noise reverberates
Ears ache
Minds quake

A ghost with a soul
A life of its own
A message to be told
A dream to mould
A secret not to be sold

It's me against you
Pull up a pew
Lay your soul bare
If you so care

A secret to share
A meeting for two
A spirit I dare you say boo
Two become one
And now I'm done


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Thanks jayrex. I liked your poem, too. Very, very nice

Here's another that I think it could work here.
It's ghostly because the beauty of his words, and his tortured soul have found a way to haunt me, and I think they always will.  


HOMAGE
by Cindy L. Keller

My feet dangle off the edge of the dock.
My mind snaps awake in a dream.
With a slight spin, I skim a rock.
The raven beside me folds his wings.

Though limerick and voices abound,
deep in his words - no greater height is found.
Known well in large cities,
as in small towns...
A masterful man of rhyme.

His bells hearken early melodies of lore.
On death's wings Godspeed him to his Lenore,
hence the raven be hushed of "Nevermore".
True peace he'll come to find.

The ripple expands in the water
and I see my bird is not a raven, but a crow.
Above my reflection, I see perfection...
The smiling raven with Edgar Allan Poe.


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stevie
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Quoted from Tommyp
Self deceit,
Slippery meat,
Whacking off,
Dirty sock.

Rely on the hand,
Dire as contraband,
Real girls won’t get you off,
So you have a quick toss.

Truth is it’s bad,
Better be a passing fad
Bringing yourself to orgasm
Is like falling into a deep chasm

Be a real man,
Bulk up, get yourself a tan,
Because masturbation is self deceit,
Woo a girl, let her give you a real treat.


HAUNTED

I'm haunted by these images of Tossy tommying off
I'm haunted by the thought of this line not able to rhy...?
I'm haunted by the fact some people might diss my work
I'm haunted by all those who think 'stevie's a beatle jerk'
I'm haunted by the chance my team won't win the flag
I'm haunted by the thought of one day having a colostomy bag

But all these fears go out the door every single morn
My kids wake up and hug me and I worry not no more





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Substitute the word 'jerk' for 'fan'. Or possibly 'fanatic'.

Being a fellow bloke I very much doubt the opening line is completely true. I think you're amused by the fact he had the balls to write it. I should have thought of a better word than balls there. Spine. That's better. Maybe not.

Good one Stevie. I'm impressed. "So's my wife".  


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Michael "No one get's me!! -cries- "

But seriously Michael, I did not get it...


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Quoted from mcornetto
Defects lie, all of iced fleets
to select Ed if the edicts flee,    
those feces tiled in sliced feet,
disorganized from self-deceit.


It's sort of obvious there's some anagram stuff goin' on here.

Maybe some people are too busy wanking...




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mcornetto
Posted: August 18th, 2009, 8:23pm Report to Moderator
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Defects lie
iced fleets
select Ed if
edicts flee    
feces tiled
sliced feet

are all anagrams of self-deceit

"disorganized from self-deceit"
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