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Brandon, a lot of writers/readers get miffed with 'beat'. This is because something's supposed to be actually happening in that beat/pause i.e., characters staring each another down etc. It can indicate the writer is just being lazy - let's throw a beat or pause in.
If it was to be an exact three seconds then you can show that easily with a clock, or a character looking at his/her watch, or a bomb about to explode, counting down the seconds etc. That's the basic way.
In your example of the museum - I would have QUIET, (MOS) show the seconds ticking around the dial of a clock for example, then four ear-splitting gun SHOTS etc. Sound returns to normal - people run, scream, etc.
Are your examples just random? What context are you speaking of?
IMO, If you are literally talking about 3 seconds - no - don't indicate it. There must be hundreds of instances in every script where seconds pass between one action and another. Can you imagine the clutter if a writer interrupted the action every time they wanted to show seconds passing? I think the sequence is okay without any indication of time. e.g.,
The crowed panics. Everyone dashes around, trying to stay dry.
Four ear-splitting gun SHOTS rip through the museum. The place ERUPTS. People spurt like wild fire to get out of harms way.
But if you are determined to indicate the time - I would rather have you put some meaningful action in between (i.e., something to take up the 3 secs). Just making this up - but something like:
The crowed panics. Everyone dashes around, trying to stay dry.
A MOTHER SCREAMS - can't find her child
Four ear-splitting gun SHOTS rip through the museum. The place ERUPTS. People spurt like wild fire to get out of harms way.
People spurt like wild fire to get out of harms way.
Not sure why this sentence makes me chuckle. Perhaps it's because I generally think of 'spurt' in terms of liquid spraying. The image I have after reading this probably shouldn't be repeated.
Not sure why this sentence makes me chuckle. Perhaps it's because I generally think of 'spurt' in terms of liquid spraying. The image I have after reading this probably shouldn't be repeated.
It was just something that happens in the spurt of the moment?