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The Dark Horse
Posted: February 20th, 2019, 9:24am Report to Moderator
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Hi everyone.

After a year, I've sent off four scripts to the Blacklist...

I am terrified - but at the same time I figured I should keep writing so I don't worry so much.

Anyways, I'm curious to know how the pros navigated this part of the journey - the "now what?" stage ha.

More than anything (this year especially), my aim is to get paid assignment work and get an agent. Did you guys wait a bit (I've been told 2 weeks is a good amount of time/distance before sending off to more places)? As well as to let them cool off a bit.

So yeah - I'm thinking of perhaps doing bibles next up? (perhaps while I wait and while everything is fresh). And then using my BL feedback/notes to fix the holes I didn't see (which is inevitable after how many months and proofreads ha) and then sending out to various screenwriting agencies. Perhaps go the competition route.

It's strange though. This time around, BL feels like just another stage - just an opportunity to get notes as opposed to being discovered, etc.

On another note: has anyone got experience with bibles? Do we use photoshop?


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The Dark Horse
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Also...  I'd like to thank everyone here for their support and help to get those scripts done.

The amount of quotes I've taken from simplyscripts that are on my whiteboard (and scribbled on notebooks, my calendar, etc.) is ridiculous. So much great advice.
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I'm no pro but I've learned to fire and forget. Send your script or pitch off, then forget it and move onto the next project. Keep planting seeds, keep yourself busy and see what happens.

TV Bibles - Write one if you like, there's plenty around the web to have a look at to get an idea of what they look like. You don't need a TV bible though until someone asks for it. All you need for a TV series is a one or two-page outline to pitch to producers. If they like it they will commission a bible and/or a pilot episode.  

If you are doing it for a competition, it's an optional extra. Most comps just want the pilot episode.


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The Dark Horse
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Hi Mark.

Thanks for the reply.

The fire/forget is great advice. Today I made a list of screenwriting agencies to send off to (I'm waiting on BL notes first though). Admittedly - perhaps I was a little silly by not getting outsider feedback before paying for feedback. I should've used simplyscripts. Well, live and learn.

Oh right - ha I just finished up my bibles (they're quite sparse - a little on character, overview, etc.). Admittedly, I kind of wish I did them first.

I've also been working on CV. Still very sparse. I know agents like to have writers with experience (competitions, plays, etc.) so I was gonna use filmfreeway.com to enter some smaller competitions so I can build up my incredibly thin CV ha.

Also - just noticed you're UK. Same here. I'm guessing you've sent off to BBC Writer's room?

Thanks again!

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The Dark Horse
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Also, do you know if it's okay to use pictures in your bible? I sourced some pictures from the internet and photo-shopped them a little. I dunno whether you need permission first? I've seen a few bibles do this - but at the same time I'd hate to get in trouble ha

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Not sure about bibles, I'll write on of anyone shows in interest in either of my pilots

But I did write a series of articles for SS entitled 'So you've finished the damned script - now what?'

You can find them here - they might be useful.

https://simplyscripts.com/?s=damned%20script

Read them in reverse order...


Anthony Cawood - Award winning screenwriter
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The Dark Horse
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Hi Anthony.

Thanks for the link - I'll check this out. Exactly what I'm looking for.

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Quoted from The Dark Horse
Also, do you know if it's okay to use pictures in your bible? I sourced some pictures from the internet and photo-shopped them a little. I dunno whether you need permission first? I've seen a few bibles do this - but at the same time I'd hate to get in trouble ha



If you're doing this for your own use or a school project, knock yourself out with the pictures, but the polite thing to do it is to attribute the original artist/photographer.

Once it becomes a "commercial" project, you need to pay closer attention. On Google's image search, click on "Tools" then "Usage rights." On Microsoft's, click on "Filter" then "License." You can stick to images that allow modification for commercial use (most of which are public domain), or contact the artist/photographer.


Feature-length scripts:
Who Wants to Be a Princess? (Family)
Glass House (Horror anthology)

TV pilots:
"Kord" (Fantasy)
"Mal Suerte" (Superhero)

Additional scripts are listed here.
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The Dark Horse
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Hi Frank.

Yeah I made them for the Blacklist and contacted them to see if it's alright. It's gotta be - I mean I've seen a few blacklist bibles where they've used images of the actors they want.

Also, how about for when you query screenwriting managers/literary managers and screenwriting agents - do you think you could send the bible too?? I know they usually want just a logline and synopsis as opposed to the script.
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FrankM
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It’s technically copyright infringement to use a picture without a license because a pitch package is marketing and therefore commercial use. There are several exceptions for “fair use” but they don’t seem to apply to this situation.

You can trawl through image search or Wikimedia for pictures, or just ignore the issue like most people do.


Feature-length scripts:
Who Wants to Be a Princess? (Family)
Glass House (Horror anthology)

TV pilots:
"Kord" (Fantasy)
"Mal Suerte" (Superhero)

Additional scripts are listed here.
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The Dark Horse
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Hey. Got a reply from Blacklist - they said it's perfectly acceptable.

Anthony - I looked over your series. Some great, valuable stuff there. Thank you. What I got from them: marketing, feedback, services, competitions. Rinse and repeat.

As far as my masterplan...

I'm going to research/try to write the perfect query email/letter and make a long list of screenwriting managers/literary managers. Go after the young, hungry ones who have time for me. Fire away and forget.

It'll probably be an idea to write a 1/2 page synopsis for each too - in case, they ask. Lastly, as I'm waiting for the result for four scripts on blacklist - I might just use and send off which ever gets the best result. Regardless of the rating.

Do you think including a blacklist review/excerpt in the query is a good idea? I know at this point I'm basically selling myself/marketing but I don't want to come across as pompous. Same time - as far as I know there are no hard and fast rules to queries.

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I can't really comment on what you are asking - so that's no help.

But, amongst all this marketing and getting yourself out there, don't forget to actually write and build up your portfolio.

I was given advice a long time ago, which was to build up a solid diverse portfolio. So if you find yourself in front of someone who can make something happen, and they come back with something like "We like you, but this story isn't for us" you can immediately come back with a different story more suited to their tastes.

Best of luck to you. You seem very driven with the right mentality (It's amazing how many new writers will write something and expect the industry to just find them)

Matt


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AnthonyCawood
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Glad the info was useful and good luck with your querying.

Re Blacklist review in your query... If they say 'best script I've read this year' then I'd try it

Best

Anthony


Anthony Cawood - Award winning screenwriter
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Available Feature screenplays - http://www.anthonycawood.co.uk/feature-film-scripts/
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Quoted from The Dark Horse
Hi Mark.

Thanks for the reply.

The fire/forget is great advice. Today I made a list of screenwriting agencies to send off to (I'm waiting on BL notes first though). Admittedly - perhaps I was a little silly by not getting outsider feedback before paying for feedback. I should've used simplyscripts. Well, live and learn.

Oh right - ha I just finished up my bibles (they're quite sparse - a little on character, overview, etc.). Admittedly, I kind of wish I did them first.

I've also been working on CV. Still very sparse. I know agents like to have writers with experience (competitions, plays, etc.) so I was gonna use filmfreeway.com to enter some smaller competitions so I can build up my incredibly thin CV ha.

Also - just noticed you're UK. Same here. I'm guessing you've sent off to BBC Writer's room?

Thanks again!



I entered the drama one last year and got to the final 4%, which was nice! I'm entering the comedy one this year, that one opens in a couple of weeks!



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