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Johnny passes Debra his drink and turn towards an exit." in which the moving is also implied but now you have a slug so people are extra sure? Redundant.
OR
"INT./EXT. JOHNNY'S CAR/FREE WAY - NIGHT
Bla bla" which seems even more redundant.
Honestly, the simpler the better - most readers are going to assume a scene set inside a car is being driven unless you specify that it is stationary.
Johnny passes Debra his drink and turn towards an exit." in which the moving is also implied but now you have a slug so people are extra sure? Redundant.
OR
"INT./EXT. JOHNNY'S CAR/FREE WAY - NIGHT
Bla bla" which seems even more redundant.
Honestly, the simpler the better - most readers are going to assume a scene set inside a car is being driven unless you specify that it is stationary.
Yep. That'll do,
I'll go the INT/EXT route if there are significant things impacting the scene outside the vehicle.
The heading for a scene that takes place inside a moving vehicle should have the word “TRAVELING” appended to it, separated from the time-of-day by a dash:
Next time, just Google it yourself instead of asking a bunch of writers who are way more experienced than you. Your "rules" about (travelling) aren't set in stone. There's numerous ways to do it and not be wrong.
I do it my way because, first off, TRAVELLING is not a fucking location. It should be in parenthesis beside the location that is TRAVELLING. The time of day comes last after being separated from the location by a dash. Read more books on screenwriting and read more screenplays and come to your own conclusion. "Story Sense" didn't create the rules of screenwriting.
For someone who doesn't know basic screenwriting 101 shit, you sure have a fucking attitude about it when people are trying to help you. But good luck with everything.
The heading for a scene that takes place inside a moving vehicle should have the word “TRAVELING” appended to it, separated from the time-of-day by a dash:
Marty, if you're really confused why you're getting so many different answer it's because there's actually no rule about petty much anything to do with slugs or demonstrating how a scene is occurring. everyone does it differently.
The key things to remember is how is your reader interpreting the scene and what is important to establish. As I said in my other post, most reader will assume a car is moving unless mentioned otherwise but it's completely understandable to put "travelling" in the slug or do the "int.ext" thing. I do both depending on my mood. No one is going to trash a script because it doesn't follow any particular style, unless it's completely unreadable or unclear.
In terms of your attitude, everyone here is trying help. When you receive negative but constructive feedback on a logline (as I did for you in another one of your posts), it's generally bad form to act in revenge by going to the poster's own scripts and simply saying you hated it (as you did to me in your Downunder logline post). The community here, notwithstanding a few bad eggs, is pretty kind. You're acting in bad faith.